BOUND: Chapter 4 - pg 2

is there a section where I can see every year that pictures were posted

christopher dean

One of your best pages yet, with some excellent damsels to boot. Well done!

The Phoenix King

I appreciate the criticism, as I always do! Comics are something of a unique medium for me, as they allow me the chance to tell stories while also giving you - the patrons - new and intriguing pinup shots of my OCs in their natural environments. But - for me, at least - the story is part of the journey, and I try to trim as much fast as possible. These pages may seem like just fan-service now, but my hope is that they key in to big story elements later on, so please trust that I do have a plan in mind, and though it sometimes takes a bit to get there, we do the best we can with what we have. Though, I have to ask, what was it about pages 19-24 that bummed you out? I'd like to know what my readers are not enjoying, so I can try to work in improvements as time goes on! Thanks!

Sneak

hmm, also a good point. This will be interesting.

kou32

Not much has happened in the comic that wasn't relevant to the story. The dialogue during both tie up games shows Ash planned to do her own thing, whether her boss let her or not. Now, She's forced into that position. Moreover, This particular henchman was the guy who thought his location couldn't be tracked by BOUND. Considering it wasn't part of the plan to let Ash escape and just leave her at the location they were filming scenes with Emma, It's very possible he's going back there and may be in for a surprise. Also the speech bubble colors have me guessing the narrators are Ash and Miri. They were used back in Chapter 2.

kelleramis

You bring up some good points, the recap seems a bit much and considering the last 3 chapters have all been 24 pages. Except for the 2 page epilogue of chapter 3. I do hope this chapter is longer. Since there is a lot of ground to cover. But maybe this is leading up to some kind of big reveal.

kou32

Hi, longtime fan of Sneak and this comic - as it happens I was extremely disappointed with Ch 3 after page19 so I think I'll start working in some criticism. As independent images the last two pages are amazing. But I have to wonder: "are we really in a recap right now". Presumably this is a convo between Kit and her boss, and if next page jumps into that and shows something new, like maybe Miri in her new digs, that'd be fine. But the last panel leaves room for concern that this recap-parallel will eat another page of screentime, which would be excessive.

Ghirahimdorf

Fantastic work, and wonderful expressions to match the figures

Love it 😍. You never disappoint us, my friend.

Zackary D'Antonio

NEIINNN, is what she would say if she could ;)

Mister Sham

lol the VM might have to change their name with all that tape on their mouths 8D. Can't wait to see how the rest of the chapter unfolds if this is how it opens!

kelleramis

Mmmmm these three look... 'Mighty' familiar. I know who I'd cast in the film adaptation!

J.