Claire's Career: The Shop Assistant page 13
Added 2025-03-22 23:41:46 +0000 UTCPage 13! !4 is right on this one's heels. I went a bit meta with this page - Claire apparently likes stories about herself...and so does Peter...
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FIVE chapters to go after this one! Lots more to come!
Fenris Comix
2025-03-24 22:55:28 +0000 UTCMy favorite character, I would like to be in the place of Peter:-), I love the idea that Claire is influenced, it can bring a lot of change to the story, I’m excited about the sequel.
Francesco Raziano
2025-03-24 20:22:59 +0000 UTCHis nose is bleeding because it's a manga trope. Regarding changes to the source material, I think I've mentioned that Patreon requires all acts to be consensual, so I HAVE to write Claire as coming up with or totally open to the ideas suggested by other characters. This story in particular has two influences on her, but I will also be including older influences as well, as the stories progress. It's been an interesting process so far, and taken some time to develop, but I think it all works. I know I have Seth Perm's approval and you folks seem to dig it and every story makes me laugh and then wanna go fap, so I'm a happy camper.
Fenris Comix
2025-03-24 09:41:12 +0000 UTCHrmm... wonder why Peter's nose is bleeding. I'll be honest, in the source material I wasn't really a fan of the 'headache' shtick to engage Claire and am so far liking the angle you're going for with Elsie influencing her. The last image here makes me wonder if she feels Peter's erection on her and decides to 'grind' him into buying even more books... and only for it to start getting her wet and for Peter to 'accidentally' slip in... (I know I know that's now how the source material goes, and this is just what comes to mind based off your changes). ;) Looking forward to more of Claire and how you handle it.
Llaaly
2025-03-24 00:03:56 +0000 UTC
