Now we're getting into the content that's more like what I want to create, written in my little notebook diary thing of sorts - haha.
Until it's all complete, this will likely stay on Patreon. I may change that in the future, but for now, this will be here.
Here is the dialogue/monologue and visual notes I have written out:
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[Brianna enters the bedroom, clearly struggling to walk normally. She approaches Shea at his computer.]
Brianna (B) : Hey...uhm, Shea? Can you...please help me with...this?
[Shea's eyes look downward and widen at the sight.]
*A few moments later*
[Both are in a standing doggy-style position next to the bed.]
Shea (S) : Keep your legs spread.
B: I-I can't help it! I -
[He hikes one of her legs up onto the edge of the high bed.]
B: Nnnm, Shea!
S: You want me deeper, don't you?
[She nods, deeply blushing. He smiles before asking,]
S: Is there anything else you want?
[Bri tries to speak, but he's going harder and faster - she thinks internally]
B (thinking) : It's bad enough that I am soaking his balls right now, but he...wants me to flat out say it?!
Admit that...f-fuuuck, how I love it...how his c*ck stretches me so far!
How when...he gets deep like this, I start to fucking lose it.
It's like...he's figured out me out, how to turn me into a fucking mess!
I'm...his little mess!
B (speaking): Y-You know what I want... [she cutely pouts]
B: You...I-I...
[He warmly smiles.]
*A few more moments pass*
[Both have shifted onto the bed in a prone position.]
B: Mmngh! Th-thank you, baby!
F-For...giving me what I want!
[They rise/lower to meet for a kiss.]
B: God, I love it! [Her head goes back as Shea leans in a bit.]
[He moves her legs wider apart so he can fit easier inside.]
S: [whispering into her ear, giving it a bite after] Go ahead, tell me more.
B [in heart eyes passion mode] : Fuuuuck, I want you to bust a nut inside me!
Don't stop, please don't stop!!
I wan' you to make me c*m, daddy! Please c*m inside meee!!
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Also a layout draft of just the general first page layout. Comic making stresses me out omg - but I wanna do more of it.

See you all in 10 years when this is done. {I hope this is a joke.}