Demise of a Cheerleader - Chapter 3
Added 2021-04-14 23:39:00 +0000 UTCCharacter building in this chapter with some foreshadowing thrown in to sweeten the pot.
Nothing too belly-centric in this one, but I'm working on a longer piece that'll come at the end of the month that'll hopefully make it up to you!
Hope you enjoy and, as always, let me what you like/hate in the comments. Appreciate you all.
Comments
Bless you Halrion! You don’t realize how much effort went into that line. I rewrote 5 times. It’s so small and such a fun detail and I just appreciated that noticed and liked it. Thank you so much for your kind words. Welcome, it’s so good to have you!
2021-04-28 14:30:22 +0000 UTCThis is fantastic! Loving Alyssa's arrogance and greed, and the interplay with Suzy. You're a superb storyteller and describer too. The image Christine, illuminated by her cellphone, floating through the midnight like a ghostly ethereal is delightfully atmospheric.
Halrion
2021-04-28 06:54:20 +0000 UTCThanks Casey! I appreciate you commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed it! More to come!
2021-04-27 21:44:12 +0000 UTCWow so good. I can’t wait for the next chapter
Casey
2021-04-27 08:17:25 +0000 UTC
