I'm not sure why but I can put myself so easily in the listener characters shoes with this scenario, so frustrated at her circumstances, the fact that she is not only beautiful in body but in mind as well being so curious and actually intelligent, but that her sense of normality has been so warped and sheltered leaving her so naive and comfortable with things the way they are when she could have so much more out of life. A sweet little song bird living in a guilded cage in isolation for so long she can't even realize how much farther she could actually fly if she decided to step out of it. I just hope this listener character is as determined as I would be to help open her perspective, conscience and heart wide enough to help her see not only her circumstances but what can lie beyond them.
Xandu
2021-11-04 09:10:01 +0000 UTC
I'm really impressed by the character and story you've created for this @Fawniva. Looking forward to the next chapter <3
Awkward Space Man
2021-10-17 12:26:03 +0000 UTC
This rich girl is interesting. She is sheltered and privileged. She sounds very nice and attractive. Some of her statements are a little disturbing. People are not supposed to see you. If you looked like that drawing, I would be a very protective father. Yet, she is thoughtful and not a bimbo. She has a brain.
Seanaxial
2021-10-16 00:57:38 +0000 UTC
Ok, I’m ashamed to admit I was only half paying attention to the words because I was too busy focusing on the piano in the background. 🤣 Very nice playing.