Monster Island Cover and Chapters 16-27 Draft 2
Added 2021-09-16 03:54:27 +0000 UTCJust got in the cover! Still chugging along with edits, heres where I'm up to now. I'm taking Friday off in the hopes I'll finish. We'll see.
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He did met his master's target of 16 times his base Vaya just did 17her base but we don't know their starting number. Also he has every meridian open so that does into account of his overall ability on top of all the high level runes he's has it is kind of crazy. @chris did he every apply all his high level runes? I just reread it all to make sure about the edits and it is a little unclear. I he got lightning, what about fire and air?
Eeekkkk
2021-09-21 02:57:23 +0000 UTCWhy? The base story is that he's special, and now you like that he's Average Joe. I read fantasy to get into the story of people that aren't Average Joe. Had I wanted to read that, I could have stayed with my diary .. had I ever written one. YMMV, of course.
Micke Andersson
2021-09-19 07:55:57 +0000 UTCI really like that Aiden wasn't the best at expanding his core. I think the new version is alot better.
2021-09-17 22:41:44 +0000 UTCi dont know why, but those wings look like seagull wings to me, might be the leaf on the left. and i agree with daniel that those wings are undersized for the size of the creature
Aran Kieskamp
2021-09-16 21:23:49 +0000 UTCCover looks great! I think the wings should be bigger. A bird that massive is going to need massive wings! Just right off the cover
Daniel
2021-09-16 19:25:30 +0000 UTCJust want to say I really appreciate the fact that I get to see the book being written and then see as things changed based on feedback that was given on each chapter and that it will change again before the final book. Thanks for letting us help make awesome books!
2021-09-16 17:25:42 +0000 UTCCover is AWESOME
Kat
2021-09-16 11:25:47 +0000 UTC
