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Rise of the Living Forge - Chapter 594

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Not bad for a first time effort by Lillia. Edit suggestions: magical swords an other items ==> magical swords and other items it said her shadow could wearing her armor ==> it said her shadow could be wearing her armor

M. Lampi

I think, within the story, that might just be a manner of thinking leftover from before the characters were sunsetted, and that tiers and levels DON'T matter any more.

Andrew Denton

Thanks for the chapter. One minor thing that annoys me in many stories: what is the purpose to having established tiers of power if they can just be broken? Like I know sunsetting is a whole thing, not just anyone can do it, but I don't think I'd even bother giving Sunsetted people tiers or levels if they just don't actually compare with others with the same designation.

Erik Zimmerman


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