HP of Mars chapter 27
Added 2023-10-02 13:23:48 +0000 UTCHarry's lands grow with immigration
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So, I admit that it took me longer than usual to get through this fic; and I admit that I Was hesitant to read it. When I saw "Mars" I rather blanched. I am not usually a fan of combining Space with magic in HP; so I had attempted several times and only managed like 5 chapters, but I finally did and am so glad that I stuck with it. I love it, and I love that you included the Nobility and Politics. You do this in several of your fics and I love you for it. Most Authors who use a "Lord Potter" angle only use it to emancipate him and gloss over or ignore the rest, either not caring or afraid to write the Politics. So most ppl avoid it but I LOVE political/royal fics; and I'm sure that you don't, but I feel like you include that stuff just for me ๐โค๏ธ. I do wish that Harry would get over his aversion to people calling him Emperor or Ruler etc, but I do get it. It's entirely in character. Also, while he is a small part so far - I do hope to see more - I ADORE Ron in here. So many authors are mean to him because of GOF and I'm screaming "He's a Teenage Boy!" One that has self esteem issues, comparing himself to his Brother, and I am Convinced Anger issues, but canonically he is Smart and I love what you are doing with him! When he thought about his Time on Mars and having his work explained to him in a way that he finally understood and that he enjoyed it and started to look to his future, I wanted to HUG him! Because, thats just it; as I said he is Smart if he applies himself, but I believe that the way He learns and the way Hermione learns are very different and I love what you're doing and hope Ron plays a larger part going forward. In fact, and I just have to slide this in here, know how you do pairs a lot, going forward when we get to that point - I know, not yet, they are 12. Although...Kenny ๐ - I'd love to see Ron involved with Harry in the lover group. Harry/Ron Pairs, especially Hogwarts era ones, are extremely rare
Christopher B Frye
2024-03-07 14:47:03 +0000 UTCWonderful to hear from you again and what a great chapter. So glad Harry has such a good support system. I'm just waiting to see what his reaction will be when he finds out about the Emperor's Fund.
Charlie Cunningham
2023-10-12 17:11:57 +0000 UTC
