Monthly Motion Comic #2 Suggestion Box
Added 2025-07-01 22:00:05 +0000 UTCEDIT: Pal is situated with a new motherboard. We've gone over the current submissions, but I will allow submissions until 11:59 PM EST on July 9th (that's today). Throw your hat in quickly if you want to be considered!
Please disregard emails saying this went up at 4:16 AM. That didn't happen. I was absolutely not up at degenerate hours delivering packages throughout Australia. This audio will be produced for and synced with a comic drawn up by my dear and talented friend Pal. Please think visually about your suggestion!
How it works:
Only four suggestions will be selected for polling. Suggestions will be vetted by Pal and I to determine their scope and viability, as well as our interest. Any ideas he or I say no to for any reason will be excluded. Likely reasons include:
Difficult art style to replicate - Pal's primary inspirations are manga and manhwa, though he is capable of realism!
Absurd scope - your idea requires too many panels to execute or features too many characters for me to reasonably afford.
The finished video will be available to $10 patrons and up, while the audio will be available to $5 patrons. However, all paid members are able to submit ideas. The winner will also get to see the finished product regardless of backer tier.
Guidelines:
Characters must be 18+ or passable as such.
Your suggestion must feature gas or scat to be considered.
Content violating Patreon's Terms of Service will be ignored. Please read their TOS before submitting your idea.
If your suggestion is a parody of a scene from a movie, game, or show, please provide a link to the scene.
Comments
Akira & Marie/Lappy (Astral Chain) I’d imagine you remember my Astral Chain idea from a while back. If submitting ideas I’ve previously submitted is off the table, I understand, but I recall you voicing interest in that idea. So I figure hey, why not pitch it here and see what happens?
Constelle
2025-07-10 01:08:38 +0000 UTCMajin Android 21 from Dragonball Fighterz. The script starts with her transforming the last person in a city with her candy beam. Amused and condescendingly remarking how none of these treats will manage to fully satiate her hunger, but will have to do. Walking and grabbing one, another, and another of various treats off the ground. Devouring them without a second thought. Time passes, commenting on how bloated she's feeling. when suddenly she feels a rumbling in her now bloated gut that gives her pause, commenting on how weaklings always gave her stomach issues, only to be hit with a far more intense cramp, causing her groan, a sloppy fart exploding out her ass. A sudden and intense need to dump major ass hits. She looks around for a bathroom for a moment, before having a "Wait a minute...!" moment where she stops and uses her magic to transform something in the city into an outhouse, proclaiming "Oh thank goodness!" Before rushing in, dropping her pants, plopping her fat ass onto the seat and unloading a sloppy dump, groaning about having eaten too much and complaining about how she knew she should've stopped after the first hundred. After a bit of explosive and violent diarrhea, she pants and sighs in relief. Taking a moment to disgustingly muse about how much all that junk sickened her gut and how much it stinks...only for too end it on a small pause followed by "Oh well, no time to worry about that." Wiping and getting up, opening back up the portapotty door. "I'm absolutely famished! Time to go find some more treats!" Followed by a laugh.
Star-Breaker
2025-07-09 20:34:22 +0000 UTCNia Teppelin and Yoko Littner (Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann) are being interviewed at a grand party after the defeat of the Anti Spiral. The two of them must have eaten some bad pig mole steak at the party because they're being hit by an awful case of the runs during the interview. The two are cutting wet pre poop farts all the while covering for each other to make sure nobody hears them farting (example: Yoko loudly doing a fake cough when Nia farts, Nia immediatley cutting in and loudly finishing Yoko's sentence when Yoko is cut off by her own stomach growls and farts). The two decide enough is enough and storm to the bathroom. Both of them need to release a Giga Toilet Breaker but there's only one fairly small working toilet. Yoko and Nia say "We're gonna combine!" and combine they do as they share a toilet seat.
JohnnyC
2025-07-09 14:49:14 +0000 UTCMarcille from delicous dungeons she was in a dungeon trying too find something really tasty she went deep in a dungeon found a hidden door with a chest behind saying dont open she opened the chest and found a bottle spicy sose on the bottle it says warning spicy and while eating and after and it helps u poop she though nothing about it she tried a bit from the bottle and thought nothing it tasted good so she drank the wholr bottle 1 hr later she didnt knew it was spicy magic laxative she startrd farting brutaly in the dungeon her stomach hurts and she thought lets go back to the city to her house while going out of dungeon she started sharting she pulled her pants down and lets out her first diarrhea wave because she knew she cant hold it after that it was better but she still farted like crazy her underwear already painted but it was still solid poop she pulled her underwear up and arrived at home she was really desperated when she arrived at her home droppee everthing and rushed to her toilet where her liquid diarrhea storm started after she was done she goes to her kitchen and reads the bootle the laxative start to act after 5 hrs it only been 3 hrs so she thought ok maybe it started sooner as wanted and cant get worser so she got to sleep while still farting like crazy 2 hrs later she woke up already shit her pants and panties her stomach in pain she couldnt stop the diarrhea so she pulled down her pants and panties gradde the bed pan under her bed and filled it in seconds it dindt stopped coming out so she rushed half naked still leaking diarrhea to the toilet completly filled it and filled the sink and went to the kitchen where she needed to use the cooking pot as toilet because everthing was full
Masterogwe
2025-07-09 04:07:38 +0000 UTCApril O'Neil (TMNT) is giving a live news report when she's hit by bubble guts caused by her having pizza with the turtles earlier that day. April, now desperate and regretting ever giving banana and anchovy pizza a chance, must endure the pain and get through her segment. Her panties won't come out of this entirely clean, but can she at least save herself from the embarrassment of completely loading her pants on live television?
JohnnyC
2025-07-06 19:11:57 +0000 UTCMugen, Ian, & Chocola (battle spirits saikyou ginga ultimate zero) Mugen and Ian once again find themselves enraptured in an argument. The two rivals taunting and insulting one another. Clearly they needed something to conclusively prove which of them was the better Battle Spirit. And it was at that moment Mugen accidentally ripped a thunderous fart, inspiring him to challenge Ian to a farting contest. Ian would roll his eyes at his gasbag rival, trying to present himself as above such uncouth behavior aside from when punishing the Triumvirate, but Mugen provokes him by mocking him about being scared he’d lose, and suddenly Ian is dead serious on participating and winning to defend his honor. The two decide to do this in a gender neutral bathroom, just in case any of them, er… “push their luck a bit too far”. The duo taking turns trying to outdo the other. Mugen has the advantage of the fact that his body produces gas more readily in response to how frequently and shamelessly he’s letting his trigger-happy butt go off, but Ian has the advantage that because he holds his farts in most of the time, it helps the pressure build up over time, and overclock his digestive. The results of which aren’t pretty. Neither chibi mascot is willing to back down, both of them giving this battle their all. Even shoving their butts into their opponents’ face before farting once things start getting REALLY competitive. But just as they’re about to unleash one last, stored up explosion, Chocola suddenly bursts in desperate beyond belief with her gut roaring something fierce. And before the boys can even register what’s going on, she practically detonates on the spot with a fart that absolutely blows everything they just spent their time ripping out of the water, easily winning the contest hands down without even knowing they were having one. Once Chocola catches her breath, oblivious to what she had intruded upon, the boys are just left utterly speechless and humiliated to have been emasculated so hard in something so unladylike. So the both of them come up with an excuse as to why they were in there, their pride too wounded to admit their actual reasons. And with that, they exit the bathroom in shame. The video below shows reference footage of Mugen. Ian is in it as well, but if you want/need info on Chocola, by all means. Feel free to ask. https://youtu.be/VcR9der5RqI?feature=shared
Constelle
2025-07-05 20:09:03 +0000 UTCCha hae from solo leveling was on the way to the gym drinking her protein shake with milk and thinks about nothing but what she doesnt know the milk is rotten since month and she will get severe food poisoning in the gym she arrived at the gym changes her clothes and goes over to the sqaut place while squatting her stomach really hurts but she ignores it then she squatted again and shit herself while squatting she droppes the bar and rushes to the next toilet she new it was not normal poop it was completly liquid water that she shit she arrived at the toilet pulled her pants down and lets it out her panties completly drained in watery diarrhea it was not just a huge shart it was the beginn of the end when she filled the first toilet she was in panic stood up she doesnt cared if she just runned around in the gym with brown panties they was white at start she rushed to the other womens bathroom but it was occupied she grabbed the trasbin in a hurry lets out so much that she can hold it till the girl leaves the bathroom as soon the girl leaves she started rushing in the room without panties and smashing her ass on the toilet with a liquid diarrhea path behind her and lets all out
Masterogwe
2025-07-04 04:13:36 +0000 UTCCrimvael & Elza (Ishuzoku Reviewers) Crimvael and Elza had made their relationship official. Going from a casual one-night stand to boyfriend and girlfriend. And as such, the duo were out on a date. And Elza being the adventurous one of the two, she decided to spice up their evening by deliberately ordering food that would send their guts into overdrive. All the while not letting on what she was up to so as not to spoil the surprise for Crim. And sure enough, when the two felt their explosive urges banging at their backdoors, Elza decided to bring Crim in with her to the gender neutral bathroom. After all, she was a futa and he was a hermaphrodite anyway. Since Crim was her submissive little angel, she gave him the privilege of using the toilet while she decided to use the sink as her improvised shitter. The two of them unloading together, Elza taking this opportunity to teach Crim of the pleasure that came with unleashing such a wicked dump. And though Crim, as usual, was quite shy about “getting into it”, Elza’s flirting, combined with the ecstasy of relieving his bowels, plus seeing Elza on the sink with her shorts down, it was more than enough to make him hard. At the finale of their shared release, both of them ended up climaxing together. And afterwards, the duo found it to be quite the exhilarating experience, agreeing that they should totally do this again sometime.
Constelle
2025-07-04 00:56:32 +0000 UTCMakima (Chainsaw Man) sets up a CCTV camera to suss out who's clogging the toilet - Kobeni, Power, or Himeno. But could she be the culprit? ----- Makima has called Power, Kobeni and Himeno to her office, informing them it’s regarding concerns over repeat clogging incidents in the toilets and that she’s singled the culprit down to the three of them. While ignoring their varied range of guilty reactions, Makima reveals her trump card, unveiling a laptop that's been connected to a secretly-installed CCTV in the women’s bathroom that has been monitoring its uses for the past week. Over the course of these recordings, one-by-one, Power, Kobeni and Himeno's solo trips to the bathroom are revealed and laid bare, leaving the trio unable to deny Makima's claims any longer. However, just before she can bring about judgement, one last recording plays, this time revealing a secret 4th person: Makima, herself! And the results are more explosive and devastating than all of previous three combined...
Mogi
2025-07-03 17:46:48 +0000 UTC"A continuation of the Panty & Stocking audio. Panty's hogging the shitter this time while Stocking is desperate to go. Panty intends to make her shit herself as payback for making her beg last time. Stocking is not in favor of that happening and finds a way to get the door unlocked. Upon getting in she forces Panty off the toilet to get her relief." - Submitted anonymously via DMs
PK - Hot Ramen Audios
2025-07-02 23:32:22 +0000 UTC"a continuation of the Yang audio. Neon lost the match despite all her efforts. As she's moping around, Yang comes to her and says she forgives her about the whole laxative thing and they can forget about the whole thing. She offers Neon a drink in solidarity. Neon gracious accepts. Unfortunately Yang spiked Neon's drink with some powerful laxatives. And just like that, Neon is sent in a panic to find a toilet. Due to her little stunt, most of the toilets are broken or clogged making her struggle worse. But she's in luck as the men's room is completely untouched. Sneaking in, she goes to town on the poor toilet. But her bad time only gets worse as her privacy gets completely annihilated as Yang and every girl she poisoned tears open the stall, live streaming and recording her humiliation and their payback." - Submitted anonymously via DMs
PK - Hot Ramen Audios
2025-07-02 23:31:53 +0000 UTCWhich outfit for Bayonetta?
PK - Hot Ramen Audios
2025-07-02 22:59:26 +0000 UTCBayonetta and Jeanne -Bayonetta The audio/Comic would start with Jeanne and Bayonetta just being finished with a couple of angels they were fighting in a subway. Bayonetta be in the middle of saying a throwaway line like “Attacking helpless girls in the subway, how cliche!” while she’s trying to pull out a lollipop from her pocket, she realizes that’s she’s out of them. Jeanne would notice this and would offer Bayonetta a mega lollipop that would be a shade of green, bayonetta would then shove it in her mouth and start sucking on it commenting on the taste being something between an cough drop and a guava fruit. Suddenly Bayonetta’s stomach would start growling with extreme intensity as she lets out a huge fart. Jeanne would start laughing her ass off saying that Bayonetta just sucked on a spiked lollipop containing the soul of Montezuma themselves. Jeanne would go on to tell a story about a trip she had to south america, and how she had to spend most of her vacation on shitting her brains out, which would then cut to a flashback of Jeanne on her trip just having the worst case of Montezuma’s Revenge, almost filling up the pit. The flashback would then end and it would cut back to Bayonetta having an awful stomach ache, Jeanne would finish saying that she was so pissed off about her vacation being wasted due to shitting the whole time, she went to purgatorio killed Montezuma took their soul, then putting it into a concoction that can create the worst case of the traveler’s diarrhea in existence. Bayonetta seeming like she’s about to shit herself would ask Jeanne why she would give HER that lollipop of all people, and Jeanne would just say, “I thought it’d be really funny, and it IS dear.” While laughing her ass off again. Bayonetta would be pissed if it were any other situation, but she’s about to ruin her suit, and she doesn’t want to explain this to the dry cleaner, so she looks around for a toilet she can use but then realizes that she and Jeanne destroyed every single restroom in the subway during their fight. Just as she’s about to soil herself bayonetta does a last ditch attempt to save her suit and tries to create a Umbran Portal to shit into (Reference for the Umbran Portal https://bayonetta.fandom.com/wiki/Umbran_Portal_Kick ) as bayonetta is creating the circle she soils her pants a bit but she manages to finish the portal which leads directly into the sewer and she tears off her suit and unleashes the most bubbly waterfall of diarrhea ever, Jeanne would still be making fun of Bayonetta for making a “Direct Deposit”. After a while bayonetta would be finished with the first wave of diarrhea, Jeanne would cut in saying “If you’re done with the Loo, I need to use it for a second.” As Jeanne would be taking her suit off bayonetta would shove the Lollipop spiked lollipop in Jeanne’s mouth, causing her stomach to rumble. The comic would end with both of them using the portal, shitting together.
RDank
2025-07-02 22:39:58 +0000 UTCWe do a adaptation of the famous nikke scene with anis and her "line of fire" that everyone infers as farts or poops like this. https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/1251229839394996366/1383981315757572168/w4s7tj.mp4?ex=6866854a&is=686533ca&hm=e00ecce1ba6135078bbb590605f33f4983cbfbae273097122004fd463a90d53a& https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/1251229839394996366/1385138063767765002/NIKKE_2025-06-19_00-57-53.mp4?ex=6866c619&is=68657499&hm=26658ffb7e9977a89d7c2857be38e1bbf3497d69a8edc67edbbddbc5a048507d& https://youtu.be/0FedTL9BXyg?si=NioTZ7aqJL1-zYjV Chapter select for line of fire. But our adaptation has all 3 including rapi and neon end up farting and shitting in the commander s face.
Ozz
2025-07-02 18:09:38 +0000 UTCMonika from Doki Doki Literature Club Only two characters appear, Female MC (they are called senpai in this request, since it’s Monika’s senior), and Monika. MC’s computer shows they are in Monika’s house, with Monika talking about her ability to manipulate levels of others’ emotions, but found the ability to manipulate levels of bodily fluids. She also mentions about manipulating people outside of the ddlc game. She tests the feature on MC, and suddenly she needs to poop so bad despite not eating dinner. She rushes to the bathroom and takes a dump. After she is finished Monika reveals she had transfered all the poop from Sayori Natsuki and Yuri and put them in her stomach, she decides to poop in the bathtub, and MC’s screen shows the view of Monika’s anus and the bottom of the tub. MC witness monika filling the entire bathtub with poop.
HagnifianDei
2025-07-02 09:54:29 +0000 UTCFemale Shez & Arval (Fire Emblem: Three Hopes) Shez is busy taking on various chores around the camp. Things like serving on the kitchen staff, looking after the horses, etc. However, as she’s doing all this, Arval is having quite the unfortunate time dealing with unresolved digestive distress. In that last battle they took part in, Shez passed the baton of controlling her body to fight off to Arval briefly, and it was juuuuust during that short window of opportunity that Shez’s body reacted to Annette’s latest cooking disaster. And yet, without a body, Arval can’t relieve this pressure. And it’s only getting worse the more they’re forced to wait. They scold Shez to find a bathroom NOW, but alas. Shez wants to make sure her chores are done first so she’ll have time to herself later. Eventually reaching their wit’s end, Arval forcibly usurps control of Shez’s body and bolts for a bathroom. Pausing briefly when seeing the bathrooms are separated by gender. Hesitating briefly in their choice of which one before ultimately deciding on the ladies room given Shez’s body is indeed female. And upon finding it? They let the can face the full brunt of Agarthan digestive hell! Of course, it’s only now that Shez chooses to ask Arval the awkward question of what gender they are, having witnessed Arval’s little moment of implied gender confusion before. And that’s when Arval reveals that they honestly don’t know either, stating how they have both “parts”. But before Shez can make a call on what gender they’d try and assign to Arval if any at all, Shez would then feel the aftershocks of Annette’s cooking affecting her. So she’d force her way back into control to unleash her own dump. And the duo would flip flop between each other to “flush out” their shared bowels so to speak, thankfully managing to both fully finish by the end. And after they flush and exit, they pass a random female soldier who had been waiting outside, with Shez jokingly warning her she wouldn’t rush right in there if she were her.
Constelle
2025-07-02 05:44:54 +0000 UTCFern from frieren is cooking the first time for frieren she wanted to take revenge on frieren because frieren trained her every day so hard that she could barely walk after so fern used spoiled meat and put alot laxative pills in frierens food and she casted a spell so frieren wouldt tast it after few min frieren started farting and shitting herself extrem she rushed to the bathroom but it was occupied after few min it was free frieren already dropped her pants outside only wearing panties (she was ready to let it out on the floor so bad is the diarrhea)that are not staned they are already drip from the diarrhea she smashed her ass on the toilet and it was shooting out like a waterfall the toilet started to overflow so she wanted to run to the next door toilet outside of her bathroom fern already standing outside her toilet listening to frieren diarrhea frieren saw that but ignored it so frieren rushed to the next toilet but fern followed her so when frieren was about to fill the second toilet sweating and in pain but it still came out after 2 toilets were full she barely made it to the sink and finshed
Masterogwe
2025-07-02 03:57:22 +0000 UTCKohaku and Ruri from Dr. Stone. The sisters have a buddy dump in one of the many newly made public restrooms Senku has had built after the Kingdom of Science has achieved indoor plumbing. Both sisters would be doing fairly massive dumps, Kohaku's being the most formidable due to her diet that keeps her as fast and agile, while Ruri's is a bit of a mix between firm and some softer poops due to her earlier health issues. Could involve other girls like Yuzuriha or Nikki, possibly having them be astonished that the sisters are choking Senku's toilets. Definitely room for more girls if anybody wants to workshop them in.
Dark Desires
2025-07-02 03:33:58 +0000 UTCArcade Star Dahlia - Pokémon Platinum This scenario takes place within the Battle Arcade facility, sources for interior pics and inspiration found here: https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Battle_Arcade The gist of this idea centers around Dahlia eating her heart out around the Battle Arcade and Battle Frontier as a whole. A vast array of burgers, kebabs, Slowpoke tails, etc. go down her gullet. It culminates with a newly-glutted and sluggish Dahlia resting on a barstool inside the Battle Arcade. She's ripping some *heinous* ass, and she's really straining to Flush these beasts Straight out of her system (Insert points of voice direction for lots of strained grunting and groaning here lol). It's like every time Dahlia feels a bubble slot down into her colon, she's taking a gamble on whether it'll just be another fart, or whether it'll be something that spells doom for her jeans... In fact, that's exactly what's happening! After one truly egregious *shart* sends her into the red, Dahlia books it from her splattered stool to find the nearest restroom. In her mad dash, all the vibrant lights and flashing games around the Arcade remind Dahlia of that terrible need bearing down on her colon; "GO NOW!" "HUGE PRIZE WAITING!" The mere sight of a Voltorb Flip machine makes Dahlia's stomach churn... Eventually, she does make her way to the little Frontier Brain's room, unbuckles her jeans, and 'deposits' all of her 'juicy earnings' into the toilet. I imagine it could end with her wiping up and swearing off anymore deep fried Slowpoke tails/something similar to that effect, or with her stomach roaring back to life once the toilet is finished flushing, signaling the start of another *big* blind on the commode. I hope you and Pal do consider this idea :} And yes, these Pokémon brainworms are eternal! :}
Tree Fiddy
2025-07-02 02:04:57 +0000 UTCMcDonald's Mom and Wendy's Mascot from McDonald's and Wendy's. It seems that "Wendy" has challenged the McDonald's Mom to a battleshit contest in some non disclosed fast food bathroom, and seems to have the upper hand as she dumps free and easy while taking potshots at her rival's personal favorite fast food place while her opposite number is not having such a good time as she unloads and tries her own banter back as "Wendy" tempts her to go all out for this, after all with all the shit she's eaten it's bound to happen sooner or later. However she eats those words as it turns from a battleshit to (for lack of a better term) a shitmogging as the McDonald's Mom manages to outdo "Wendy" through unloading some hefty/borderline hyper waves of fast food powered diarrhea, to the point where the sounds/stink/smells overpowers "Wendy" a bit and she tries to tap out, however the McDonald's Mom has a lot more left in her and "Wendy" can't go anywhere soon as the Mom lets out another wave as the comic ends.
Benton
2025-07-02 02:04:41 +0000 UTCWendy's Mascot from...Wendy's. In a vein similar to a commercial/infomercial, we see a variety of women in various fast food restaurants having some sort of stomach problems and relieving themselves in some form (Pooping into to go bags, desperately waiting in line for the bathroom, having the shits in a very packed and busy bathroom, etc.) all while "Wendy" is narrating over all of it saying how other fast food places will give the shits from mediocre food all while having such inadequate facilities to handle what comes out all while robbing you of your money, while at Wendy's you can get great food at good prices and if it doesn't agree with you, the bathrooms will at least be clean. We then cut to "Wendy" on the toilet while saying all of this and nuking the toilet underneath her, saying that at least her dumps don't *always* back up the can.
Benton
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