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Windy Bug

I don't think that's what Hawkmoth had in mind... Not that anyone besides Ladybug is complaining.

I mostly did this just to test out the new slider I had made to switch between Marinette and Ladybug. I tried to make this comic even shorter, but somehow it still came out longer than I anticipated.

There's also just something about this that I'm not satisfied with. Maybe it's the fact that I just don't care for the dialogue I wrote and kept trying to rewrite it, only for me to come up with nothing new or improved. Or maybe I feel like I could have done a better job at telling the story, but was unable to do so while keeping it short and sweet. I guess artists really are their own worst critic.

Either way, I hope you guys like this one! Hopefully I can finish one of the other two projects I've been working on lately so that I can move onto other things.

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Thanks! We creative types have to learn to love our own works lol

jjj6

No worries! I finished the game a few weeks ago and absolutely loved it! Feel free to chat with me about it whenever you want!

jjj6

Sorry for the lateish comments worked a double on Saturday and FF16 stole all my time away from me yesterday XD Plotwise I think I'm in the middle of the game and it's starting to click with me and Clive's combat is starting to get fun!

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Artists really are their own harshest critics. I guess it makes sense on some level since the person who made a work would know the ins and out of it and since they were there at every step of its creation so they would spot perceived flaws when others who are seeing the final product think it's fine. Case in point in nearly everything I write whenever I go back and look at previous works I keep thinking "Oh that could've been better" "This section is too wordy" "This needed to be expanded upon" "Does this make sense to the reader?" . Despite you and several others telling me I'm good at coming up with stories and writing dialogue. Anyway I think this turned out fine for a short and sweet comic especially since it's main purpose was to test out Marinette's transformation slider. 👍👍 I look forward to more sightings of the spotless Ladybug XD

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