ELLA Chapter 23: Grateful
Added 2021-08-03 14:33:04 +0000 UTCThank you to everyone who stayed past the first! I'm not sure if it's normal for so many people to drop off every month, or if something about the story wasn't what they wanted or expected. I'm always open to input, ideas and feedback here or on discord. Thanks again!
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All I can say is maybe. It's hard for me to picture Ella ever truly standing up to Kari or leaving her. I think Ella would need a lot of help from someone who can back her up and help her to be strong in rejecting Kari. Rejecting Kari would also put Ella and that someone else at odds against fem suprema and the whole city as well. Hmm..... we shall see.
2021-08-07 11:55:47 +0000 UTCFor someone who's been such a horrible wretch, it would be very satisfying for Kari to learn the true depths of despair, i second the idea of her losing Ella and coming to regret her words and her deeds.
2021-08-07 06:27:24 +0000 UTCI just think it would be interesting to see what Kari would do when she loses Ella due to he involvement in Fem Suprema, that because she became so dedicated, she loses the one thing she didnt want to lose. I mean it could lead her into so many paths, such as reaffirming her devotion to Fem Suprema, to kidnapping ella and trying to free him from the conditioning, flat out leaving Fem Suprema, maybe committing a crime to try and get ella back. Who knows. I mean as it is it would be the greatest lost love story i could think off. Ethan gives Kari everything he has and than loses his everything to support her in turn leading her to lose him and she doesnt realize how much he gave her until its too late and he is forever gone. How tragically romantic would that be. It would also be kinda poetic because she gets exactly what she was wanting but its not what she was expecting.
Kayla Anne Koerschgen
2021-08-05 00:22:40 +0000 UTCI almost feel like there is going to be a point where the mental conditioning has gone so far on ella that ella actually starts getting with BBCs and gets more pleasure out of it than from Kari or her sister. I think that would be fun to see Kari start to get jealous that her toy/whiteboi is now being taken in by others and get the feeling that she is losing ella herself. Especially if conditioning went so far as to lead ella to believe she is the property of a king and not of the queens he has been following. Especially since he is being conditioned to no longer find women attractive and only be attracted to BBCs. And than if she still has the empathy braceleted and it goes off for her every time ella cums because of a BBC. Still follows the feminization story but also lead to a happy end for ella and a sad end for the one who brought this on to an innocent person who had truly loved her. It would be even better if the BBC was Darius and he loses interest in Kari after getting involved with ella. I just think it could be a cool to step out of the norm with a forced feminization story where the main character loses everything but the one who brought about the change gets a happy ending. I feel there are too many of those.
Kayla Anne Koerschgen
2021-08-04 23:54:48 +0000 UTC
