page one , panel 1 e 2
Added 2020-10-09 23:44:47 +0000 UTCyo, almost finishing the first page.
halp with the text. is there something wrong or weird?
Comments
Everybody needs a proofreader. Also writing in a second language is super tough, and you did super awesome at it!
Mario E Young
2020-10-19 04:24:45 +0000 UTCTrue.
Gizzy LeChat
2020-10-16 15:08:41 +0000 UTCIf English isn't your native language, even if it is, no need to worry. It's a fucked up language because it follows other languages into dark alleys, beats them up, and takes what it wants from them.
Vigilant Satyr
2020-10-15 15:36:08 +0000 UTCLance has a nicer ass now, hurry up and get another chapter done
Gizzy LeChat
2020-10-15 13:50:29 +0000 UTCFUCK! every sentence was wrong! haha
Void Nosferatu
2020-10-14 05:26:46 +0000 UTCAwesome, didn't his butt get bigger, not like I mind.
Gizzy LeChat
2020-10-11 02:06:49 +0000 UTC"before she comes back"
2020-10-10 11:19:22 +0000 UTCIf my warm cum wasn’t there as proof, I would never believe I had just fucked him!
Mario E Young
2020-10-10 03:39:13 +0000 UTC“What an amazing ass!”
Mario E Young
2020-10-10 03:36:27 +0000 UTC“Maybe you should hurry up and change those pants before she gets back.”
Mario E Young
2020-10-10 03:34:27 +0000 UTC
