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Sean Archer
Sean Archer

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Critic's Corner!

Our fellow photographer, Art, sent his last photos for Critic's Corner. And look at this, it's a pretty good and confident job!  
A few things to be improved:
a) Composition. Try to use more cinematographic cuts for the spectacular shots like this. Before:
And my version, more space, more color!
b) Again, we need more space, this time above model's head. 
c) Don't forget to use a bit of Liquify, when models looks massive from some angles. Before:
And I removed the nose ring. Because small details like this look strange when image is not big enough to see it (mobile phone screen)   
d) I think it's better to remove hair from model's face, for the same reason
e) Great shot! Maybe add some light and sharpness to the the pair, and use more popular crop. Compare before and after:

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