Comments
Great story with, in my eyes at least, pitch-perfect narrative flow. That little twist at the end wasn't too bad either.
2023-11-07 23:56:17 +0000 UTCIt put Mister Parker on the map for me too.
Steve McSheffrey
2023-11-05 23:09:41 +0000 UTCThis is the first story of yours I read and I was instantly hooked. Seeing there's a second chapter now is amazing
Jordan Rice
2023-11-05 16:15:17 +0000 UTC
