Expertly done my friend. That moment before Su pulls away and Kuvira gets that nuzzle of skin to skin contact perfectly emotes how much Kuvira cares about Su. It evokes that feeling of loving someone so much that an embrace is not enough and you literally want to breathe them in. Perfection. Absolutely nailed it.
I wouldn’t be surprised if Kuvira got teary eyed after finally hearing Su say that she is proud of her. I also loved the awkward moments at the beginning, like the holding of hands. It helped convey that bit of tension on both side to remind us that this is more than a simple hug for both of them.
This is my third addition because I just keep seeing little things in their body language that is SO good. The gripping of the fabric by Kuvira. Ahhh, you really smashed it! Something tells me that this is the moment that motivated you to draw so many back to back chapters. I feel like this moment had crystallized in your head and came first. And everything else just worked itself out because you knew this was where it had to lead and this was exactly how it would be.