Holyman
Added 2018-09-18 19:45:32 +0000 UTCThoughts on the latest chapter?
I'm not too sure if I should proceed with this planned norse arc or set it aside for the time being and do a chapter revision to focus on the young devil's arc instead. The current reviews seem fairly balanced, so I was wondering what you guys think before deciding on a course of action.
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I have to agree here. The Transition was jarring to me. There is still much to do with the three factions before deciding to meet and open alliances with others. I think the old saying is clean up your house first before helping your friend clean theirs.
Jade335
2018-09-22 00:31:32 +0000 UTCHonestly, I like the Norse arc. But, it feels like it's too soon. Shirou becomes the leader of the three factions then immediately jumps into the Norse pantheon. It would instead be nice seeing how he deals with being the Leader and how that (somehow) leads to him forming an alliance with Odin. Just my personal thoughts on the last 2 chapters.
Garn
2018-09-20 05:53:30 +0000 UTCI actually changed my vote for the current poll. I missed that you rewrote the chapter, pleasant surprise, had no idea you did it or when, but I’d like to see where this goes. Sadly Vasto didn’t have the support needed to win this time, so I’m genuinely curious to see more of Shirou’s interactions with Serafall go. Maybe an offhand comment about what he said way back in the war about her being a magical girl and ignorantly and casually crushing Sona’s hopes at the same time. Edit: My vote tied the current poll. Let’s see what happens.
G1Splicer
2018-09-20 03:03:14 +0000 UTC
