Chapter 1 Page 5
Added 2019-10-16 02:47:12 +0000 UTC
I had to redo this page two times. My expression by the end was the one Bibi has in panel 6.
EDIT: Apologies for the double update for this. First post was blurry, so I had to re-upload entirely.
Comments
Thank you! I gotta stop writing stuff when i'm on my last leg at night LOL
Saane
2019-10-25 22:51:26 +0000 UTCMan, all these expressions are great! Text-wise, I wouldve put a bit more space between "your" and "pouch" in the second panel, but otherwise it all reads great.
Risax the Imp
2019-10-16 05:33:15 +0000 UTC