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Wonder Woman: Among Friends

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I'm going to update Friday this week because I'm posting a full length, 15-16 thousand word Hermione Granger story. After that, I'll be posting about 5000-7000 words of a story every Wednesday.

What's the rough schedule you thinking of on posting the stories?

MH

Hey thanks! Doctor Kavka is a bit like Poison, but I imagined her having actual disgust for Diana, rather than thinking she's an interesting specimen. She has a passion for stripping the special powers from metas, neutering them, making them no longer so "special". I thought this story was a bit loose, so I'm glad you liked it!

Great work! I really liked the scene with the doctor, you write that cold confidence really well. Reminded me a lot of Dr Poison in another of your WW stories, I really enjoy that power dynamic of one woman being so utterly in control and having that clinical precision as they go through the motions of a heroines inevitable defeat. Also loved how you made it clear this is the end for Diana, you covered every base in terms of her options for making a comeback in that there are none. I always prefer that to the stories that are more open ended as this one feels complete. I love a villainess changing a heroines costume to reflect their ownership so Ivy putting the vines on Artemis was fantastic as was the small touch of Diana's costume at the end being more sexualised. Cant wait to read more of your stories, if this is an indication of their quality I'll be signed up for as long you keep writing them.

Markus Jones

If that's the kind of thing you dig, you're definitely in the right place. Something about a powerful, clever, indomitable heroine being overcome and made a possession has always fascinated me. I'll be posting some options for my next story after I finish Hermione, but are there any characters you'd really like to see?

Dang, cowboy. That's some good villainy der. Glad to see you back, your stuff was always some of my favourites to go back to. So few authors follow through on the powerful and proud heroines actually losing for good, and your approach of having our damsels properly fall into submission is perfect. Not enough that they are depowered, defeated, and dominated, but they come to accept that kneeling before their Master/Mistress in chains was where they belonged the whole time!

I know enjoyed this story because I am greedy for it to be expanded upon at a later date. Great Job.

Rodimus903

I really, really liked this story. The mind games and the unexpected villains were great. I wish we had a post script that told us what Diana's deal was and I would like to have had a little more fighting. Feels like there is a loop hole there. I know the chip has a long life, but, technology is a fragile thing. There is no way this holds Diana for longer than what 6 months to a year. I would like to see one of the two women escape and try, futilely, for revenge.

Rodimus903

Unless it takes me more than a week to write, then I'll give you guys part of another story. I'm also lining up projects for everyone to vote on, as far as what I write next.

so next one is hermione right?

thelamantin

Glad you liked! It's something that's been in my mind for a while :p

holy fuck holy shit holy-Ahem yeah its pretty good. This, this is my kind of story, i fucking love the shit out of it! I could legit read 1000 stories like those, it has absolutely everything i loved in DID stories. 1. Female on female only 2. Sensual domination from a kind captor (loved every single little caresses given to both amazons) 3. Drugs, sensuality overall 4. A broken captive that ends up as a submissive slave 5. Leashes and pets I was pretty amazed by Julianna, she was gorgeous, threatening but oddly comforting and i loved her banter between her and the other vilainesses. Each one of them had their own personnalities, motivations, i was fucking blown away. Julianna casually handgagging WW like she was nothing was delightful, Diana herself had a nice focus too, i wasnt invested because i knew the brand, i was invested because i liked the characters IN THIS STORY. And the cherry on cake, Artemis as brainwashed slave to Ivy, oh mygod. And it was unbelievably well written my god! Every touch, smirk and moan feel impactful! It is by far your best story to me, the pemise is great, the characters are well written, its hot as fuck, its soft and slow, the sheer opposite of Ryona haha. I dont know how you would tag such a story but i want more of that haha. What a blast to be your patron!

thelamantin


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