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Goth Girl Revenge

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Dan never got along well with his sister, especially after she went into a goth phase.
Every time he saw her with a new piercing, new clothes from hot topic or with her lips colored black and a studded collar around her neck he would make fun of her.
"You look like a fucking freak, Charlotte!" "Maybe you should hang around the dark ride at the amusement park, you would fit right into the decor, you psycho bitch." "Maybe visit the graveyard, maybe one grave has a boyfriend for you!" he would shout, bringing his sister Charlotte to tears at such meanspirited words.

But what was worse was that he also made sure to harass her like that at school, and since he was quite popular many people believed what he said to be true and also went after her and her friends.
Dan spread rumors about how much of an easy lay she was, causing sleazy guys to go after her, even after she told them no.
He also said about how she loves to drink blood and how she does weird rituals with her friends, so the rest that went not after her for sex shunned her, leaving her only with a small group of female friends who were also goth.

One day, after an especially vicious attack by Dan where he pushed Charlotte into a puddle of mud and laughed at her the girls decided enough was enough.
They made plans for revenge, and after 2 weeks of preparations, Charlotte invited all her friends to a sleepover to put their plan into motion.

While the girls were upstairs Dan was in the living room, watching some TV when he heard someone coming down the stairs, and when he turned he saw one of his sister's friends, Stacy, in nothing but a black nightie.
"Hey Dan, I kinda got bored at the sleepover. But maybe you have an idea for some fun?" she said, making her voice sultry to lure him in.
"Well, looks like you are not the same freak as the others upstairs. Yeah, just come with me to my bedroom and I will show you some fun" Dan said with a smug smirk.
Inwards Stacy was shuddering in disgust at Dan, but she knew it would all be over soon.

"That sounds lovely. But why don't we have a drink first to get in the mood?" she said, going over to the kitchen to fetch two beers.
She opened them and went back to give Dan one of them after secretly putting a few pills inside.
"Heck, why not?" Dan just said, downing his beer in one go, making Stacy smile.
Not even 2 minutes later he fell down unconscious to the floor as the medical sleeping pills took effect, after which Stacy took Dan under the arms and brought him upstairs.

She dragged him into Charlotte's room, where the unconscious boy was met with shouts of joy that the first part of their plan worked.
"Well brother, looks like it is time for some revenge" Charlotte said with disdain before she and the others started to undress him.
Once he was nacked they covered Dan in waxing strips and made him hairless before gluing on some small breastforms.
After that Charlotte grabbed a small chastity cage and forced it onto her brother before putting some glue into the lock with an evil smile.

With the base done the girls began to dress their new doll up in the sluttiest clothes they could find.
They first put him into a pair of black panties, followed by some fishnet stockings before forcing him into a pair of black hotpants.
After that they forced a black top over his head that just barely covered his chest, with leather straps forming a chocker.
To complete the outfit the girls pulled thigh-high socks over his feet, and attached them to the shorts before grabbing black combat boots, filling them with glue and forcing them onto his feet.

The last part of Dan's transformation into a slutty goth chick was make-up.
First they glued a black wig to his head before waxing his eyebrows into thin arches and adding tons of pale foundation to his face.
This was quickly followed by heavy eyeshadow, and big false lashes, after which the girls covered Dan's lips in plumper and colored them black.
Lastly, they pierced his nose and tongue, adding a nosering and stud respectively, before adding some golden chains to his top to complete his gothic look.

Once they were done the girls continued their sleepover as if nothing happened and waited for Dan to wake up.
After nearly 2 hours Dan finally began to stir. He felt quite dizzy, with a dull pain in his nose and on his tongue he could not explain, and when he opened his eyes he saw his sister and her friends staring down at him.
"Fad do you fant, fweks" he spoke with a lisp he did not realize, making the girls giggle.
"Nothing, Danielle. Just wanting to see your reaction" Charlotte said with a smirk.
"Thaniell?" Dan repeated in confusion, before he finally realized how he talked, making the girls burst out laughing.

He quickly stood up, even though he was still unsteady in his feet, before walking over to the mirror on his sister's closet.
"FAT HAF YOU FONE!" he shouted in anger as he saw his reflection, and he could not stop staring at his new piercings, finally understanding where his lisp came from.
"Nothing much, dear sister. You know how they say that teasing is a sign of affection? Well, since you always teased us about our outfits we thought that you must really LOVE to look like this. And who are we to deny you your wishes?" Charlotte said with a snicker.

"Fat the hell? Unfo fis fight now!" Dan screamed, trying to tackle his sister, but since he was still quite dizzy he only fell to the ground.
"Oh, I don't think so, and if you want to see your little friend again you better do as I say."
With that said Dan's sister held up a small key, and suddenly Dan had a bad feeling about what that weird sensation in his groin was.
He quickly pulled his hotpants away, but sadly for him his worst fears were validated.
"I see you found our little gift" Stacy said, looking gleefully at the rapidly paling boy.
"If you ever want to get the key to your cage you better do as we say, bitch!" Stacy spar, making Charlotte nod in agreement as she looked down at her brother.
"Now here is the deal: You always called me an easy slut for dressing the way I do. And now that you are looking sluttier than I ever did I think it is time to put this to the test."

This made Dan's eyes go wide, hoping his sister is not talking about what he was thinking.
Just then the doorbell rang, and chatter could be heard outside the window.
Dan quickly rushed over and peeked outside, and he saw a few dozen guys in their front yard.
"That's right! We invited a bunch of guys over, and you will give them a good time." Charlotte just said with an evil smile, taking way too much fun in tormenting her brother and dashing all his hopes in an instant.
"Here, you will probably need this" she continued, giving Dan a black lipstick.
"Well, we want them to have a really good time, so he probably could use one more" Stacy then said, handing Dan another black lipstick.
"But we promised the guys a really, REALLY good time..." another girl said with a snicker, handing the poor boy a third lipstick.
"Well, you are ready now, Daniele. Now don't waste any more time and show them what you can do. And remember: You better give them a really, REALLY good time if you want that key. And always apply new lipstick after every guy!" Charlotte shouted as Dan hurried down the stairs, hoping to get this night over as fast as possible.

Goth Girl Revenge

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I had a goth sister. I also ended up dressed like a goth girl

Brett Aldridge


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