Unorthodox Farming: New Chapter 16
Added 2026-02-16 11:00:00 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the chapter :) Possible Edits: Torvac once boasted that for their fiftieth wedding anniversary, Orlana had fed him their youngest grandchild's weight in braise(d) lamb. Capitol > Capital (Capitol is a state building, Capital is the chief/main city of a State/Country. I recognised the (nameplate?) above her head. She was acting like a granddaughter who was about to see_her grandpa get in trouble. She wasn't unattractive, but I doubted she'd ever invest(ed) in charisma.
Iain Grubb
2026-02-17 03:58:32 +0000 UTCGlad you are able to salvage words already written. Especially glad because this is an awesome sequence.
William Howe
2026-02-16 22:43:01 +0000 UTC“She was acting like a granddaughter who was about to [seeher] grandpa get in trouble.”—> see her
William Howe
2026-02-16 22:39:53 +0000 UTC“I recognised the above her head.”—>something missing
William Howe
2026-02-16 22:35:52 +0000 UTCGlad to hear you've had a good month! Thank you for the chapter, and for keeping the family antics in place.
Matthew Wilmsmeyer
2026-02-16 22:31:27 +0000 UTC
