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The Magistrate: Chapter 72

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No comma is necessary before “Sage Knowledge” in the following: “…You may call me, Sage Knowledge.”

Aaron A. Cole

You had been using the past tense with “Field Marshal Kang knew Tobias…”, but suddenly & briefly switch to present tense with “Tobias shows the field marshal the same trust…”, so it should be “showed”

Eli Pomerantz

Field Marshall Kang is probably going to join the war and soundly beat whoever they go against. That or there will be a fight against the Khans that will make the Great Clans and Sects sit up and go "WHAT?!".

Joel Magnuson

I love that half the plot revolves around the philosophy of teaching. My wife is a highschool teacher and college professor, and every year she gets all bubbly when one of her students stops just repeating and starts thinking for themselves.

Robert Nolan

Lord Bi’s Neighbor: “Why does our Emperor keep sending gifts to Clan Bi???”

Aaron A. Cole

Sounds like Book 2 is going to end with Tobias as emperor. Man, those that he owes favors to or are his friends are going to be so happy with his largesse

Bob of Doom


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