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Unorthodox Farming: New Chapter 12

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I like this version better.

Aaron

You don’t dress like your purse IS empty.

David Bordelon

Salem hopping in to prevent the near-death drama is a good change.

Lion Heart

They should probably build a teleportation circle in his town /future city Might be better sooner it would probably get some good bonuses when it upgrades

Abdulaziz ALRumaih

Thanks for the chapter 😄 Possible Edits they were (attractive) no matter what angle they presented. She wore a pair of red leather trousers and a (matching) vest elderly man was chopping vegetable(s). (")No one ever told me that putting all my free attributes into charisma would make it stronger when I reached level 100?(!)” “So, it does have a beneficial effect by(but) that effect is negated by your equipment.” Your statement(s) hilarious

Iain Grubb

I much prefer this version of Farentine 😊, the other one was much too cold and procedural.

Daniel Heritage

Endurance, Constitution, Intelligence, and luck don't count for the purposes of this.

Benjamin Kerei

Am I missing something, how is charisma his highest attribute if both endurance and constitution have a higher value on his sheet?

Robert Nolan

In this version of reality Salem realizes how stupid people are and puts an end to the experiment before it can begin.

None ya

Nice! I like this version of chapter 12 and I think Salem reaching out and helping explain his new ability is a lot more in line with his character

Quex

“Your statement [is] hilarious because to us it has so little risk compared to what we normally do that we don't consider [it] a part of our duties, but something we have [to] do during our time off."

William Howe

“If you natural[ly] gain”—>change “natural” to ‘naturally’

William Howe

Farentine laughed while nodding. “I would have gone with stunning scholar. You don’t dress like you’re purse are empty.” *your

Aaron A. Cole


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