Surprise(42 pages)
Added 2017-07-11 18:35:22 +0000 UTChttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BzxIo3WeTaQBOU5taVB3QkZUeVU?usp=sharing
Sorry for the long delay......
I was just too busy last month. Although I finished the render, I don't have time to edit them and add conversations.
Besides, forgive my poor English. I still have to learn to write oral English...
ไธญๆ็่ฟ้ๅ็ญๅพ ไธไธ๏ผๆฅ่ฟ้็ไนๅบ่ฏฅๅบๆฌ่ฝ็ๆ่ฑๆ๏ผ้ฝๆฏๆไฝ็บง็่ฑ่ฏญโฆโฆ
Comments
It's on Pixiv now.
YT_snow
2022-10-21 23:10:45 +0000 UTCwhat happened to the story, there is nothing
Deathy
2022-10-21 02:16:58 +0000 UTCthis is by far your most outstanding work. Now that you tie up with "the breakout" it's almost perfect. You know you should do a little back up about this one, like somekind prequel, for example, where did the girls get the gun? did they use it in someone before? it is an alien artifact? i don't know but the premise is so fun and lovely that you should try to explore in the future more about it. Whatever you're a genius man! I will never get tired of say it.
Rasalgheti
2021-04-23 22:51:19 +0000 UTCunique story, really enjoyed it
Gwendaline Devine
2017-11-29 13:06:31 +0000 UTCI'll message you next time
YT_snow
2017-07-12 09:03:41 +0000 UTCOh thank you
YT_snow
2017-07-12 09:03:20 +0000 UTCMessage me, and I'll see if I can proof-read your English text.
Himesama
2017-07-12 08:38:07 +0000 UTCWhat a twist ๐ฑ
88l00fdaeD
2017-07-12 00:44:22 +0000 UTC
