Quick Poll - ch5.5 Humiliation Scene
Added 2026-01-23 10:36:23 +0000 UTCComments
78% it's wild 😈
Dexsaw
2026-01-26 21:51:34 +0000 UTCthe scene was good but i didn like how it changes the relationship with danton
Cres
2026-01-26 03:03:13 +0000 UTCI very much enjoyed the scene but stoped it at the last choice. Do you think you could create those scenes in a similar fashion in the future so that everyone could enjoy it without entirely changing dynamics?
Amhiel
2026-01-25 12:12:44 +0000 UTCSo for my "canon" run, I stopped it because I felt it was going too far for my tastes... But that doesn't mean gooner brain didn't find it super hot when watching it! I also liked the aftercare scene if you did shut it down. So what you had is good. I would say keep it up, but keep the hardcore humiliation locked to specific suitors so that people that don't enjoy it can still enjoy other characters and not be locked out of content for every suitor. Plus it would be a lot more work having hardcore humiliation for EVERY suitor and not just one or two.
Pachirisu
2026-01-25 01:44:20 +0000 UTCIt's hot and I'd like moreish but you kind of took it in a direction I wouldn't want to follow through with on the back end. Like him cumming from the bulls cock while dirty talking was hot but after that it went in a too danton leaning direction, the whole thank our new master angle was too much it focuses too much on Danton for my taste. Ideally he's just there as a dildo and Cassandra uses the comparison more than anything else to tease her husband. It was good that when you ask to stop she either blue balls him or tells him that's all for the day and he backs off respectfully, you wanna lean more into that and it would be something good when the story is finished to backtrack earlier in the story to make cassandra seem less like she intended to slip danton into their lives right away and not really having fantasies about him all this time, and him not as much of a dick to both of them if they dont give him the keys off the bat. I have no issue with you taking it in whatever direction you take it just when it leans too heavily into focus on the bull being their dom, and other stuff like hard core emasculating him and basically making him not the priority in cassandras eyes it's not for me. Imo it's ideal if Cassandra just focuses on pleasuring her husband and Danton's just glad to get anything on the table and if hes gonna be friends with the husband and is clearly bi himself then he should be looking to team up with cassandra to make him feel even better and just play the role for him. It's in bad taste if he gets too much power with the couple cuz now you're entering realistic cucking territory which is lame imo. I think in that scene after the husband's first orgasm where he loses is as far as I'd personally take it. The big thing that stands out with the story is how utterly devoted the wife is to her husband's pleasure. Like how you have her always doing consent checks and at the end there after the scene she reminds you it's just play and her pleasure is your pleasure and actually is believable and not a platitude, that's something no other nts I've seen before and that's what's going to keep it on top of the pack. I think you have a good grasp on it overall just the bi and Danton dom stuff is in my opinion extra for the people who are just really into being sub to another dude, and not actually that good for the story. Her draw as a wife is her unwavering devotion to her husband, so anything she does has to be from a lens of her doing it for him. Like she isn't doing anything with anyone because he's a cuck who will let her get away with it as long as she says the right things to manipulate him, she's doing it because it gets him off good and that makes her happy, and that's the perfect angle that you touched on including in the dialogue afterwards. Overall a great scene just for me 1/3 was the limit for me. I wanna see her humiliating him more and it's hot, but there's a very clear line that she needs to be able to hold up herself. It would be good if u have a high of a certain stat or some sort of tag that she's able to stop on her own. She seems to be ok pushing his limits but it would be sexy of her to say it's enough. Like there's asking him if he wants more, and then there's knowing him enough if to keep going or to stop. You can put that in the players control and just write it as her reading you and it works fine. I think if you take anything away from this its to make cass humiliating him the focus and keep danton out of it except for the bi sub route cuz even cumming on invading bull dick is fine but once it starts to feel like shes actually letting danton take over its not sexy anymore. Encouraging him to talk down to her husband too is a no unless bi sub route. Sorry if this is a mouthful to read. Absolutely fantastic story, double S tier for me and you do so much right and with clear intent not just random. But there are a few things that I can nitpick about and I do think they matter. Looking forward to wholesome orc futa bull, sky is the limit with that one it just hits different.
Ethos Terros
2026-01-25 00:43:08 +0000 UTCI think it would be hot once her corruption progresses if Cass begins mixing in some truths with the humiliation play. That way, we would always be left guessing if she really means what she says or if she's still just doing it for MC. It'll makes her words sting more. Of course without pain there can't be pleasure. 🤤 I'm sure there will be wholesome cuddling afterwards.
CriminalCuteness
2026-01-24 04:34:12 +0000 UTCCould you add an humiliation where jack is collared and all fours while cass is making out with danton? It will be hot if you added cleanup scenes while hubby is being humiliated by cass
jamo serrano
2026-01-24 01:31:53 +0000 UTCYes I owe you an apology lol
Whimsy
2026-01-24 00:26:40 +0000 UTCI KNEW IT!!!! THEY CALLED ME CRAZY!! (Lol but fr, go crazy. The further you go into writing the deeper you can go into the fetishes. People are in it for the journey.)
Ronin
2026-01-24 00:23:05 +0000 UTCMORE!
Simmons711
2026-01-23 18:27:00 +0000 UTCMore humiliation and I think it was perfectly said by Collar Studio that the humiliation makes the aftercare sweeter! Wouldn't mind Danton joining in to tease the MC and Galina too hehe
Seittitgib
2026-01-23 16:38:28 +0000 UTC
