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Added 2023-10-15 09:00:00 +0000 UTC今回の更新は おしっこの量と勢いと臭いが凄くて 耐えきれずに吐いちゃうシーンです。 アサミさんの心もちょっと折れかけてる。 このあとの展開はまだノープランだけど エロくて抜けるものが描けるように頑張ります。 そしてコメントをして頂いた皆様ありがとうございます！ この漫画の第三部についてのご質問ですが 続編は描くつもりで第四部ぐらいまで構想しています。 他に描きたい作品もあるので続編を描き始めるのは 大分先のことになると思いますが 次に描く作品は20～30ページぐらいのボリュームに抑えて もっと作品を発表する間隔を短くしていきたいですね。 とは言え今描いてるアサミさんの物語を 10ページで無理に収めようとして 駆け足展開になるよりはページを増やして 納得の行くものを作ったほうが良いと思うので 年内の完成を目指していましたが 手を抜かずにじっくり仕上げて行こうと思ってます。 ではでは、今週もご支援ありがとうございました！
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there gonna be 2 more parts?? amazing!!
jjaassoonn
2023-11-01 05:40:27 +0000 UTCI am happy to hear that Asami’s story will continue for 2 more parts! I am interested to see what sensei has in store for Asami in the future. I look forward to all of your future works, sensei. I am also glad to hear you will be increasing the amount of pages for this current doujin. I agree it is better to make quality work you are happy with without rushing development. I’m sure sensei will do his best! Thank you for more of your amazing work!
MILFConnoiseur
2023-10-23 10:15:06 +0000 UTCGreat update Sensei! Can't wait for the continuation, and also for the third and fourth parts of this series! If I might make a suggestion for how to continue/end this specific doujin in the last 10 pages: continuing the theme of Asami being their sex toy / slave, they could lie to her about this being "the last time" as she is begging them for it to be over. Yasucci and Hide could tell her that it's their "final" turn with her, and that she should act like a dog, where she does anything they tell her to do, and where she walks on all fours, to humiliate her. They would then have their "turn" with her (blowjobs, more peeing, her licking their ass...etc). After they're finished, they could tell her they lied and it's not in fact the last time. Either way, however, I'm sure whatever you decide to make will be great as always
randomgang69
2023-10-17 23:23:34 +0000 UTC😋
ben shen
2023-10-16 06:11:38 +0000 UTC
