20.4
Added 2023-12-03 10:55:45 +0000 UTC
+ deleted panel that would've gone on the end here for added comedy. I decided against it because I think the story will flow better on to 20.5 without it.
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I've been mulling this over but no one else has said anything, and Parker feels to me like she'd talk in that repetitive way, so I think I'll keep it as is. Thank you for the feedback though, very appreciated!
2023-12-10 11:39:27 +0000 UTCI love that people are becoming more open to Tess now that she had a cool girlfriend. It would be really bad if it was a fake girlfriend, right? :p
Krankar Volund
2023-12-04 23:08:52 +0000 UTCMaybe this is just the way I talk I guess, but I briefly did a double take at "But really it was so good!", since I was like wait she already said that. I think the format looks good overall and isn't worth changing, but figured I'd mention it in case.
Rachel F
2023-12-04 01:36:08 +0000 UTC
