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The King She Chose

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Is it bad that the extra ability slot is more exciting to me than what he got as a gotcha power?

Deikon AL

Will fix those thanks for pointing them out

SullenMadMax

Tobi to some extent knows the broader story and what went down through Osmosis and a few clips of the series but he hasn’t properly watched her series. Also glad I did her pov well enough, even though I feel like it’s not good enough.

SullenMadMax

Yknow, I'm curious if Tobi will roll Youpi, Pouf or Meruem since they're all in the gacha. How would Pitou react then, I wonder? 🤔 Also, Pitou seems to be unaware that Tobi already knows of her past. He does know her and her series, right? But either way, I liked Pitou's pov a lot.

Deathknight134

Correction; "Kamugi" --> "Komugi" "The women noticed how none of the men around here, after the first few tried something with her when they thought they could get away with it, and ever since then, the others had stuck close to her for protection." 'Noticed how none of the men around here' did what?? You cut off the sentence and didnt even continue it afterwards to give it a proper conclusion.

Deathknight134


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