After-hours 37 p2 up, what's next?
Added 2023-12-09 00:36:32 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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I like it! when Mary falls out of her chair we could have a funny "BWOMP" or "HONK" Sound when her butt cheeks collide with the floor! maybe have a thought bubble next to Bonnie's head with Mary's large butt while she's thinking, same with Mary as she's thinking of Bonnie's buns! the final lineup shot could be a rear shot of the girls with the large hill or road between their shapely rumps squeezing down on the bike seats! also this could be either bonnie's vision, or for the next page: A short sequence of may's cheeks going side to side like so: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/52706513/
Thestooge
2023-12-09 00:56:54 +0000 UTCSo, monica will now point towards the road bikes sitting in the garage. "We'll have a race! First to reach the overlook down the road, and back, wins. Should be an hour ride, give or take." To which bons and mary would look at Monica, then towards each other. Then fall off their chairs laughing. Mary would be like "You can't be serious. A tortoise, wanting to race a horse, and a hare??? on bicycles nonetheless!? " We'd jump to a closeup to Bonnie's face, thinking to herself, all serious all of a sudden. "Hold up... Monica isn't stupid. In fact she's the one wiping the floor with us on boardgame night. She's up to something... But then again, If I agreed, i'd get to stare at miss mary's butt, jumping up and down... up... and down..." Bonnie's bunny brain has taken over. We jump to Mary's head. Who is thinking the same thing, but with bonnie's ass, she just goes "...b-bunny..." (Bnuy syndrome has taken over) Monica thinks she has to sweeten the deal some more. "F-fine, the winner gets Muggs all to herself tonight." Muggs just shrugs in agreement "eh, sure". Hands are shook. The page ends with an establishing shot of the next scene. a wide shot of the three girls, lining up with their bikes on the road outside the garage. whaddaya think?
Kenno Arkkan
2023-12-09 00:47:18 +0000 UTC
