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AH27p29 up, what's next? (last page i think!)

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AH27p29 up, what's next? (last page i think!)

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thats a good idea. a nice big send-off for all of them \o/\o/\o/\o/\o/

MizaruSketch

hmmmmm it is indeed a lot of ground to cover, so maybe a "two page spread" would be enough? Cuz dang it, when will i ever have a chance to draw em as brides ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค

Kenno Arkkan

My idea would probably be too much work lol but here it is anyway: each girl has a panel of them imagining themselves as a bride so we get a nice final POV beauty shot for all of them saying 'i love you!' then they all collectively beg Al to stay.

MizaruSketch

HOpefully I can compress everything into this page :O The girls open up. Tell aldo how much he has changed them for good. Each one asks to "give me a chance! aldo-kun!" Aldo agrees on staying, they all cheer, but they immediatly look at each other. They start asking again to give them a chance, Polite requests turn into tugs, then into pulls. "What did I get myself into?!" Aldo monologues himself, as the shot zooms away. "...I'll have so much paperwork to do tomorrow". That's the general gist ๐Ÿค” Any ideas how to improve on this?

Kenno Arkkan


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