Poem ASMR: The type of lover I need
Added 2021-10-05 15:55:07 +0000 UTCi need someone
who knows struggle
as well as i do
someone
willing to hold my feet in their lap
on days it is too difficult to stand
the type of person who gives
exactly what i need
before i even know i need it
the type of lover who hears me
even when i do not speak
is the type of understanding
i demand
Comments
Omg RIGHT??
Andie
2021-10-10 17:02:18 +0000 UTCOooooh your voice is deeper with english.... π¦ First I can't focus on the poem because of your voice. I had to listen several times π
2021-10-10 15:39:35 +0000 UTCI replayed it a couple of times.. I really like this one ππ€
μλ¨Έ
2021-10-07 13:49:34 +0000 UTCYou did so so well, Will. I'm so in awe of people who are able to speak more than one language, and who strive to add inflection and emotion into it. Poetry is hard in your own language, so for you to recite this in English and to do it so well, it's incredible. There was only really one sentence I could see that you could have changed where you paused, but overall I was so inspired listening to this. I'm very proud of you, and you should be too. π
Megan
2021-10-06 04:18:05 +0000 UTC"willing to hold my feet in their lap on days it is too difficult to stand" Ooohh~ did you write this? This is such a great line! π― (Maybe it's the line breaks, but I thought this was a Rupi Kaur poem at first LOL) π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°
Andie
2021-10-05 21:14:51 +0000 UTC