Taking a dip! P34
Added 2025-10-23 15:02:58 +0000 UTCP35 will be the first time I reference a pros*ate in a piece of artwork. Yippie!
I'm not really sure about the "Gotta push you more lose" line on P35. Like, the meaning is definitely what I want him to say, but I know there should be a better way of saying it. It just feels like my English is off there.
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oh helll yeaaaaah, so exciting, its goin in! also some suggestions, if you wanted to keep the same words, you could correct "lose" to "loose" aka "gotta push you more loose" or a phrase that sounds better "gotta loosen you up" or "gotta stretch you out" "gotta loosen you up" sound more natural and more grammatically correct
Stomak
2025-10-24 22:55:16 +0000 UTCLoving this sm!
Teabrush
2025-10-23 17:22:50 +0000 UTC
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