Dark Hunger
Added 2025-05-24 19:00:06 +0000 UTCIt’s been a while since I’ve written a story, so I wanted to do one focused around Halie and… well, you’ll see!
You can find the story by following the link below:
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/gksi1skuiw6dopdv0oq1o/Dark-Hunger.pdf?rlkey=oa84o7jcdr369ld5su0f5rx4v&st=fie6r431&dl=0
Comments
I hope that if/when you make another written story, Chloe is the POV character. It'd be fun to get inside her head
Lourenzo Dasilva
2025-12-10 02:36:15 +0000 UTCI hope Halie gets the courage to tell Natalie outright how she feels about her.
Stavros Karatsoridis
2025-05-26 00:14:15 +0000 UTCThis is a nice story that fleshes out Chloe’s character some. It’s nice to see that she’s not always “rough around the edges.” The illustrations are quite good, too, as always.
Stavros Karatsoridis
2025-05-26 00:13:25 +0000 UTCOh my god. Oh my god. This is what I have been praying for. This is it. My rereads of the previous salty-verse stories can make way for a new entry. A goated one. OH MY GOD
sad hammerhead
2025-05-25 21:04:37 +0000 UTCYou are genuinely such a good writer, the way you describe all the details of Chloe’s body had me blushing. It was also good to see a softer(heh) side to Chloe’s personality, she really is just a big teddy bear :) also her outfit makes her look very pretty 👉👈
seasamy
2025-05-25 16:45:58 +0000 UTCHallie’s just like me, fr fr.
KU Olkenbak
2025-05-25 12:12:45 +0000 UTCDamn Salt, you really flexed your writer muscles with this one! I’ll admit, as a Chloe-Stan I’ll enjoy anything you make with her, but you legitimately did an amazing job with this one!! Definitely hope to see you create more of these short, light novel styled stories in the future!!
Shadow Basilisk
2025-05-25 09:26:15 +0000 UTCPerverted Hallie ayayyayayayyayayayayayyayayayayauuayayayayuauauauayauauuauayayayhayayayyayaya
Alex
2025-05-25 08:07:12 +0000 UTCBro cooked a gourmet meal with this one ✋😎🤚
Teetar
2025-05-25 04:17:03 +0000 UTCCHLOE FANS ARE EATING GOOD TONIGHT! (almost as well as Chloe herself). Nice to see a different character pairing with Halie and get a better feel for both of them.
Tobias Charleston
2025-05-25 03:34:58 +0000 UTCAlmost feel like this needs a sequel, great stuff that actually has me liking Chloes character. One of your best stories so far
Nowwho
2025-05-25 00:45:19 +0000 UTCWhy is the writing lowkey fire
Chardawg
2025-05-25 00:06:01 +0000 UTCLoved this story! Especially the characterization for Chloe, as admittedly I’m not very familiar with her beyond being delusional about her own size and a bit self centered at times. And the descriptions of Chloe’s size, and how it affected not only Halie but the world around her like the furniture, her very presence being huge, it was awesome. Need me more BWS writing haha
J958678
2025-05-24 23:40:10 +0000 UTCI’ll be the first to say that Chloe has never been one of my favorites of your OCs. But this shockingly 1!3 instantly made her now one of my favorites of yours. Which is no surprise since everybody else loves her and by God that pic of her in that white sweater and blue jeans makes her look absolutely beautiful! Also, you’re an amazing writer and I love reading these stories and would love to read more !
Toon Boy
2025-05-24 22:03:44 +0000 UTCThe only thing better than more art of your OCs is more OC lore (and this story had both 🥹)
Michael
2025-05-24 20:52:16 +0000 UTCThis was a really great read! It's lovely seeing Halie's dynamic with Chloe explored in much more depth than what we've already seen thus far. They are both such great characters. Seeing them share wholesome moments together — as well as Halie's conflicting, lustful desires — was super fun. I mean, I don't blame her at all. Chloe would make me feel all sorts of things too. You're as phenomenal a writer as you are an artist, Salt! Great stuff!
Wet Cabbage
2025-05-24 20:47:08 +0000 UTCOmg this is so sweet I’m actually in love ;w;
Ohgodplease
2025-05-24 20:19:14 +0000 UTCYou're going to post the pics separately like with previous stories?
kuopiofi
2025-05-24 20:02:15 +0000 UTCPeak fiction
RottonLuck
2025-05-24 19:57:21 +0000 UTCOh this story was fantastic! I really really enjoyed this one!
Brebonsfw
2025-05-24 19:55:36 +0000 UTC<3
Undertaker
2025-05-24 19:46:36 +0000 UTCThis is by far my favorite story you have written thus far! I love the interaction between Halie and Chloe. It really feels like how friends of a common friend interact. Slightly awkward alone together without the common thread. Side note, I also forget how fashionable Chloe is sometimes. More to her than meets the eye, a lot more. I personally loved Halie's internal battle to stay pure to her love for Nat. I don't blame her. Much like the dark side of the force, Chloe's temptation is powerful. I think we can all agree Chloe is indeed pure, concentrated sex appeal! I'll probably get some flack for doubting her affection, but I can't help but think sometimes, is it really Nat she loves, or does she just really like feeding fat girls. Could be both? Halie seemed to really enjoy feeding and watching Chloe stuff her big gut. Sammy too on occasion. There certainly was some lust there. But I know Halie will confess to Natalie eventually. With friends like Chloe and Sammy acting like bumper guards on the path of love, she'll get there, one day.
Showtime
2025-05-24 19:36:30 +0000 UTCI reread the old stories in preparation for this, and I gotta say, this was wholesome as hell and might be my favorite story so far. I’m happy to see Halie and Chloe interact and get along after Halie used Chloe’s gut as a speed bag lol
EatMyTail
2025-05-24 19:34:07 +0000 UTCThat was a very cute read. Nice to know someone is in Halie's corner regarding her romantic intentions, lol.
LeftHandManGary
2025-05-24 19:24:27 +0000 UTCHehe I agree, you're not alone in hoping for that!
Skellie
2025-05-24 19:22:20 +0000 UTCDelicious read! :D The constant teasing and swelling of Chloe's gut, the fun show in the background, Hallie going a little feral with lust... my only wish is that they'd gone a lil further and figured out those feelings together, but that can always happen later(if you wish it, of course!)
Skellie
2025-05-24 19:21:56 +0000 UTCOooh this was a really fun read! I won't lie, it was kinda fun to see Halie sort of succumb to her desires and whims. IDK if it was intentional but it served as a very fun parallel to Chloe, with both of them easily succumbing to their own personal type of indulgence. All I know is that these two being around each other too much is probably dangerous, both for Halie's sanity and Chloe's already-devastated waistline. Really great work man!
sunsetteOS
2025-05-24 19:20:26 +0000 UTChonestly a pretty fun read (even if i was secretly hoping the whole "will-they-won't-they" thing would be answered with a solid "they will!" lol), glad to see haley and chloe getting along
fa1995
2025-05-24 19:14:27 +0000 UTCI’m thinking it Halie reaction towards everyone gaining weight around her
Heyitthatoneguy
2025-05-24 19:05:29 +0000 UTC
