Beach Stuff Feedback
Added 2024-10-27 22:45:08 +0000 UTCBeach Stuff is done! It was fun to work on as always, and I wanted to try leaning into more slice-of-life this time around. Now it's about time I asked you all what you thought of it. Please be honest, I'll take things constructively and try to take what I can into account for future projects!
So vote on the options you most agree with, and if you have specific feedback you'd like to offer, please leave a comment. I'd really appreciate it.
Comments
I enjoyed this little side story very much. It was cute seeing them tease and play off each other, especially the part where Courtney got so flustered and blushy at the subject of marriage. I can't speak for everyone here, nor can I recall if I brought it before, but what I would REALLY like to see in a future installment is Shannon's weight gain journey, the original Couple Stuff could have gone a couple pages longer and we could have gotten "flashback" panels or bubbles showing her a previous weight here in Beach Stuff
MatsuoTanuki
2024-10-30 03:25:19 +0000 UTCA voted CYOA with the original cast of girlies would be so peak
GekkoV
2024-10-29 20:42:44 +0000 UTCAll in all, Beach Stuff was good. I wasn't really sure when/if we were leading to anything in this story until page 10. Now that we know this is the middle part setting up future developments, we're good. Overall score: B
FlyingHigh1998
2024-10-29 04:43:29 +0000 UTCThis was such a great story and I would have loved to see more! I think there is still story left with these characters. Not necessarily at the beach, but one thing I was hoping to see was Courtney struggling to get up, and we could maybe have had a "wardrobe malfunction" thrown in as a bonus.
Chris and Julie Anne
2024-10-28 17:00:01 +0000 UTCMore feeding and emphasis on the struggle of her weight
Dartvador14
2024-10-28 16:04:02 +0000 UTCI'm gonna say it, I joined for the fats, I stayed for the story.
van Holden
2024-10-28 11:59:59 +0000 UTCGreat layout work. Cute story, I’ve been looking and fats for a long time. Yet Courtney is something special.
Ceo
2024-10-28 09:04:05 +0000 UTCI was hoping we'd see them in the water, but regardless this was once again a Feast for the Eyes
Gopongus Schrongus
2024-10-28 08:58:37 +0000 UTCSame. I can understand why almost everyone else loves them, but personally, I'm not a huge fan.
Joe Smith
2024-10-28 03:42:41 +0000 UTCWould be great if you did this kind of story and length with the other characters, Chloe etc
Jimbo
2024-10-28 01:33:05 +0000 UTCIt was a lovely story. Got to see these two develop their relationship even more, and hint at their next step. My hope for the future would be to see more stories like this with your other OC's. We've had slice of life moments and little misadventures with the cast, but longer and more fleshed out interactions would be wonderful to share. Also still hoping for that D&D style "what-if" adventure with Nat, Chloe, Sam and Halie mentioned a long time ago during a stream. Lol
Showtime
2024-10-28 01:30:05 +0000 UTCI definitely enjoy the coloring style (with small highlights) that you used for this comic, with just a couple of full rendered pieces for stand-out art. And the way everyone acts is super cute!! Great writing for them.
Trey MW
2024-10-28 01:13:21 +0000 UTChehe nugget. sorry just love your user name and photo lol
Tuk-tuk
2024-10-28 01:12:32 +0000 UTCCourtney is almost too attractive! Unreal how cute she is
James Duke
2024-10-28 01:03:11 +0000 UTCI selfishly would have wanted more fan service such as different angles of their bodies and more parts of them spreading lotion on each other. BUT fan service aside, i will always take a). A slice of life comic with BBWs and b). Character development lol
Toon Boy
2024-10-28 00:59:25 +0000 UTCI love when you do comics with oc’s, it makes me hope there would be comics or long form continuity with the other girls (Halie, Nat, Chloe and Sam) I think I speak for a lot of people that we would love to see more consistent comics and or story stuff!
Louis
2024-10-28 00:46:14 +0000 UTCcan we get a feast for the eyes with Nat and Hayley next? those two are my favorite and I really want them to "will they".
Tuk-tuk
2024-10-28 00:36:04 +0000 UTCI think they are pretty hot design-wise BUT also a little bland character-wise
sad hammerhead
2024-10-28 00:26:03 +0000 UTCI'm the minority of not caring mutch for this pair. Whilst the story & artwork was great I couldn't get into this one as I just don't like the characters all to much.
Biggie smalls
2024-10-28 00:12:23 +0000 UTCThe poll is a bit confusing so I'll just say it was perfect and I can't wait for the next part in this story
Zeroxoxoz
2024-10-28 00:11:41 +0000 UTCDef agree with all of these. Great content, great balance of fan service, great story, great paneling, great length! I will say, for those arguing for longer length: we *are* getting a followup to this. I think that could afford to be longer and make explicit. But this here felt like a really solid appatizer to build to that, it’s the perfect length.
PrivateXimmy
2024-10-28 00:11:08 +0000 UTCYour characters are very adorably written, they are always a pleasure to read. I felt the execution of the comic was decent and worth the effort, maybe not your absolute best, but I certainly wouldn’t call it poor by any stretch of the imagination. I really enjoy the story of these two, and while there wasn’t much in the terms of stuffing or weight gain in this portion, I don’t think it was necessarily needed nor warranted. Overall, I think it was a great addition
CinnaSticks
2024-10-28 00:07:29 +0000 UTCI liked the fanservice, but wish there had been more story to go with it.
Nugget Says Fugget
2024-10-27 23:29:34 +0000 UTCHonestly I assumed the proposal was going to happen a few pages later in the comic. Probably better saved for another story though.
Kitt
2024-10-27 23:27:41 +0000 UTCIt was an overall good story. I was expecting a little weight gain/stuffing but a cute short story without it is a nice change of pace.
A Man Named Jed
2024-10-27 23:17:29 +0000 UTCI'm appreciate the shorter length. The 300+ page behemoth comics are starting to get grindy, and 4 pages is too short. 12 felt like a satisfying amount of content
Meaningless Theories
2024-10-27 23:16:28 +0000 UTCSpecifically, I feel like there was a missed opportunity to really get into the knitty-gritties for rubbing some lotion on. I want a close up of someone's tummy getting kneaded! theres probably some other really fun fan service which you could have cone for instead. That kind of thing would have been the icing on the cake imo
nagatomunch
2024-10-27 23:15:52 +0000 UTCI'm gonna have to vote for both "good length" and "could have been longer" because while I feel like the story was nicely paced, I am ravenous for more of these two. They are absolutely adorable together.
Gonkulous
2024-10-27 23:06:18 +0000 UTCNgl, it has Courtney, so it’s automatically peak 🤷♂️
Arekusanda._Ketsunagi
2024-10-27 23:00:16 +0000 UTCI adored the story so much and the art was wonderful as always
FluffGirl
2024-10-27 22:56:43 +0000 UTCI loved everything about this and hope these two get more than just one more adventure together in the future!
WreckitRalphFan001
2024-10-27 22:52:54 +0000 UTCI loved it again kinda wished it was longer since there were alot of things that could've been developed more
Tiger676
2024-10-27 22:51:25 +0000 UTCmy main thought is more diversity in shape. a medium fat would have been a good addition (it doesn't work here obviously, but in another story).
Tea
2024-10-27 22:51:03 +0000 UTCSo if i were to say i showed the comic (and the previous one) to my gf.. XD But seriously, i love these two so much. Their wholesome vibe, the mix of wholesome coming together and very hot mutual stuffing/gaining is a amazing. Obviously this comic was just showing them off in their size but that was also fantastic. Mainly i want it to be longer just so i can see the page or two about the actual proposal cause i bet it'd be so good!! But that's being a bit of just wanting to see everything, what you have here is amazing
Jade
2024-10-27 22:49:57 +0000 UTCMy only gripe is that I wish it was longer. I loved everything else about it, and I enjoyed seeing Sharron grow more confident
Apostate of Hate
2024-10-27 22:49:04 +0000 UTCI voted for various things but I really wish it was hornier mainly.
ShoreMcLoving
2024-10-27 22:47:38 +0000 UTCGreat story. Honestly, I’d lean just a smidgeon more into the character development for our two leading ladies. They’re both incredibly charming.
Terrador
2024-10-27 22:47:37 +0000 UTCGals having trouble getting to their feet is my weakness, so that's a big plus ❤️
Leon
2024-10-27 22:47:10 +0000 UTCFats gud, I happi.
Eliška
2024-10-27 22:47:09 +0000 UTCtruth be told, i think this was fantastic ! your characters are amazing and i love their dynamic so so so so much !
Faye
2024-10-27 22:46:50 +0000 UTC
