Tipping The Scales Page 5

Do either of these characters have names? If so I would love to know. Thanks

Jester Hyorax

We need more comics like this please 🥺🥺🥺

Karsten Varaklis

Looks amazing but I wish we had these two women’s names

For a new concept, would be cool to see a female sumo comic. Like seeing a girl inspired to be a sumo, trains and gains weight, and becomes a champion in the end at her biggest. Or maybe even a woman pioneering women’s sumo.

Retroholic

Can you make more of these comics

Karsten Varaklis

very true :\ except partially in the first page

Jayix Chezro

Never saw the red heads belly once

VISFNOSM

Also, REALLY loved this comic. Looking forward to your future projects!

Shadow Basilisk

Fun story! I definitely think you should keep experimenting with this type of format. Even if the art's a bit less polished/detailed in some spots, that style has its own charm in addition to being more regular content (kind of like daily newspaper strips). It's also great practice for plotting/pacing that might be helpful with the longer-form stories...

WeaponA

Like many others, I would have loved to see what happened between Day 374 and Day 1000, BUT at the same time that final panel hits so much harder because we didn't get to see it, so I really can't complain. Overall this was a lot of fun and I loved that we got a new page every other day. I look forward to more of these. Regarding concepts, I would love to see a dystopian - or utopian, depending on who you ask - future where morbid obesity is the new female beauty ideal and skinny women are force fattened against their will until they're huge. They are fattened in specialised hospital-like facilities where they are not only force-fed, but also given weight gain drugs and hormones to speed up and maximize their gains. Something like that would be cool 😇

Michael

How about this concept: an obese older sister is too fat to go about life easily, so her younger sister helps her out. However, the stress of helping her sister out, and how gluttonous her older sister is for food is a bad influence. They both end up putting on weight with the younger sister putting on more weight than the older in the end.

Shadow Basilisk

I would say the only real feedback is perhaps making it a page or 2 longer to be able to fit in more of the progression.

BigSoftMommyMilkers

Oh LAWD! That belly~ <3 I'd love to see an epilogue (or even a short sequel) where Red slips back into her old habits, then we could see them both in their full, flabby glory. It could be called "Balancing the Scales" ;P

MDP

I love the transitions from fit and athletic to fat❤️

dN9

agreed

Michael

Personally would love more fatties getting stuck. Like in doorways, on chairs in cars ect. Also clothing that is too thight, but it of course just got smaller in the wash

Ceepert

Much preferred this comic. The simple coloured style is nice. We had two likeable characters with cute dialogue and a nice relationship, which was satsifyingly reversed by their changing weights. Seeing the black haired girl cruelly deprive the redhead of snacks at the start makes us want to see her get her comeuppance, and you delivered. Most importantly, that final panel is just pure art. Love her giant sweaty gut being so fat it can't even fit in the panel, mirroring the first page, but clearly showing she's far fatter than her roommate ever was. Great work!

Phat94

The truth would have been good if the comic had had one more part where the weight gain of the black hair could be seen more

MasterWS

how in the hell

fa1995

I like that the redhead is still cute and cuddleable at the end.

PhantomAppear

Absolutely LOVE the way you drew the gals on this page. Great work!

CassieRoll

BwS Great 👍 stuff. Agree with a previous comment of pacing. I love the final panel but seeing that medium huge before the finale would have been nice. With a short form we don't need too much Rev up, going straight to the thiccc will always be appreciated since it promises larger returns at the end. I could just imagine the final panel if we had a faster pace in the first few pages of the gain xb. Concepts I'd like to see would be a Streamer E-Girl getting pushed towards indulgence/gluttony by supporters and/or a country bumkin getting huge training for an annual eating contest before a finale where she places first eating herself damn near immobile.

Dang ol' Dingus

better with salt your comic is one of my favorites, I don't know if I'm worthy of asking you for something as a fan of your art, I wanted to see if it's possible to make a 4.5 page where I show the process from day 374 to 1000 or the day before, thank you very much forever brighten my day with those chubby.

Brand Mark

I loved this but have to kindly echo these thoughts. Loved the freedom and I think we all understand there will be further refinement with each new short project. But, I definitely forgot this was a short story with the initial pacing. Great work though.

CorgiRacing

I loved the pacing of this one as well as the simple themeing to it especially! I feel your simpler style worked really well for this and adds it's own level of charm to the project! I think if you stick with that, it'll give the series it's on unique feel imo. As for added themes, revenge gains would really make for a fun tail (sabotage or spell schenanigans.) As well as an office setting gain where someone gets too comfortable in their new position!

Spectral Spider

I wish there was a page 4.5 to see some days between 374 and 1000

Dunchester

Amazing work

Soul

Yeah, for only 5 pages it took a bit too much time getting to the gain and then the gain escalated very quickly and was over. But i LOVE the end result 100%

BodyEx

Is it too much to ask for a prequel? is to tell how the redhead got so big and a final sequel. to like day 3000?

cristian morales

This was short and fun, it took one of duo tropes and potrayed it perfectly. Really enjoyed this and will be looking forward to the next one!! ^-^

Navix

Loved it! Would love to more of these two in the future, or maybe just a one off with both of them absolutely huge.

Videos900

I a fatter epilogue is needed but awesome story overall lol

Blazingfox77

i think thats just the perfect weight for red head. Not too skinny and not too obese! (she still was pretty cute before the weight loss though)

Jᴀʏ

fuck 🥵

Michael

Well now that no one is holding her back, the redhead could probably join her friend again with the chunky girl lifestyle :3 I hope there’s one last part, like an aftermath later on

Jayix Chezro

I love how the red head is still so perfect even if she's not at a massive size anymore. Shows me that both chubby and super sized have their merits

Naval warfare

I’d have to agree. It was good but it felt like it was over so quickly

Wilder

I absolutely the fit girl becoming massive. Heck she’s even more massive than the original chubby girl x3 I agree with BodyEx, I think next time the pacing should be a bit better. Heck I forgot this was the final part :P I would love to see girls at ms red heads beginning weight and ending up bigger than the black hair girls final weight :P

Jotaro

Wow she got HUGE!!! I think my only note is the pacing of the gain was a tad slow and uneven. Didnt really get going until page 4/5 and then that last panel such a major jump in size.

BodyEx

I think she’s past the point of no return ms redhead

Wilder