Action Toys page 15
Added 2023-06-04 13:26:34 +0000 UTCGirl winning streak is coming to an end.
Page 14 is also changed, I rewrote the "muzzle" line to better fit the final result on this page + some minor art changes everywhere. Like usual, previous version is also there, so you can compare changes.
Next 2 pages is dialogue heavy, similar to page 14. Due to design reasons, I will need to start drawing page 17 first and 16 later, so they both will be done later then usuall, but close to each other. Probably will finish Watch Party before finishing them both.
But first, bottom row of this page gave a very stupid idea - and as we all know it's the best kind of ideas - so I need to quick-draw it immediately =)
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Reminder to not post my patreon exclusive pages outside, since they not fucking finished yet, and I may change things later, both in text and in art. Some assholes continue to do that and now there are a lot of Action Toys galleries with outdated pages on the internet. I will start to label them with big WiP texts, but will start from next page, since I gonna post 13-15 outside soon anyway.
Comments
I wouldn't have stopped the spanking entirely; long pauses between while the vibes warned them up, then pick up the pace according to how they react. Kori would probably be getting 2-3 swats for every 1 of Raven's, but even after 4h not back up to original pace. More to surprise and shock and keep off-balance mentally
Shremedy
2023-06-29 05:18:42 +0000 UTCRaven's mere mortality is getting the better of her, meanwhile Starfires, alien physique means Robin has a LOT of homework to do to keep her happy in the future.
IvyReed
2023-06-18 16:36:45 +0000 UTCI think Starfire is still winning. Raven, not so much.
Not
2023-06-13 12:58:32 +0000 UTCart tweaks is not leading anywhere, I simply think of a new thing to add and draw them.
SanePerson
2023-06-13 10:37:29 +0000 UTCI have a guess where the latest art tweak is leading. It's a stupid idea, Sane, and I'm glad you're going with it. 😎
Shremedy
2023-06-13 09:29:28 +0000 UTCRaven is so gorgeous here, particularly that close-up panel. Excellent work!
The Phoenix King
2023-06-12 09:06:17 +0000 UTCI lile that star has little sparks in her eyes. Nice touch
Samantha Updegraff
2023-06-10 18:13:58 +0000 UTCthe lines on the butts are a little weird, but other than that amazing page. I really love ravens face in this one and how exhausted she looks.
2023-06-05 23:50:29 +0000 UTCI never understood why people do that. You are actually pretty generous in that you post it outside in a timely manner.
JCK
2023-06-05 19:46:44 +0000 UTCoh, for fuck sake! Some little bitch already posted this outside. Well, I tried, but WiP text for half the page it is from now on.
SanePerson
2023-06-05 13:59:51 +0000 UTCcf NEEDS to get a few photos of those o faces for when the girls escape (and they will)
Morgan Carige
2023-06-05 07:15:44 +0000 UTCthis series is going great to greater, I love Raven's horny face, too exciting.
tripalloca
2023-06-05 06:53:56 +0000 UTCAnother sexy page! Love their expressions at the bottom, especially just how disheveled Raven looks. Looks utterly overwhelmed and certainly no longer winning
Second of Many
2023-06-05 01:22:45 +0000 UTCstamina, experience and self-control )
SanePerson
2023-06-04 19:54:16 +0000 UTCA matter of stamina eh?
Trevor Bond
2023-06-04 19:33:17 +0000 UTCWow, four hours really did a number on Raven 😜
The Mu
2023-06-04 14:49:10 +0000 UTCNice!. Ref folk here that are reposting … why??
The Cad
2023-06-04 14:37:42 +0000 UTC
