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Added 2021-09-19 05:01:00 +0000 UTCThis one has been a long time coming. Let me know if it is consistent with past chapters. There are references to these events scattered here and there, and I want to make sure I haven't forgotten anything in finalizing the details.
Places to look: 35, 38, 68, 87, 141, 152, 156, 158, 161. There may be more.
Of those, 35 and 68 have had some minor edits. Needed to resolve some issues that came up when writing this out in a way that made sense. Latest versions are on Royal Road.
Comments
One of my favorite chapters. Thank you.
Jan Alexander
2021-10-02 15:24:53 +0000 UTCDude, what? Rain isn't fleshsinging, he's not affecting their souls or bodies the way Lerith did. The improved memory and intelligence from Winter comes from the overmana. It has nothing to do with cold or arcane mana. Similarly, Spring should improve muscle memory and coordination through overstamina and Summer should slow aging probably. Fuck if I know what side effect Fall would have. More efficient metabolism?
Cirvante
2021-09-26 01:37:16 +0000 UTCPretty excited to see what secondary effects Rain is fleshsinging onto all his Ascention members with this prolonged exposure to Velocity Aura. We already know the cold/arcane mana from Winter gives increased memory/intelligence, so I'm hoping for something like acuity or reaction speed.
Starless
2021-09-26 01:25:30 +0000 UTCI could think of one better: Ascension enters the chasm and with Rain’s reduculous purification zone (that will have Either Aura as well, so it will even go through solid objects) of probably over a kilometre (not counting if Rain uses his next stat ring to get into sync his stats into the thousands) and would start cleaning out the chasm the longer he’s there, and then once hes at the camp, power the teleporter for everyone to leave. Then see what happens if he changes all chemical slimes to crystal slimes there and make it only spawn crystal slimes, just to see what would happen. Both short and long term.
ZCochraine!%
2021-09-22 21:43:32 +0000 UTCPlease let Ameliah return to Brightside eventually and Airwalk everyone out of the chasm, while giving the finger to the bank guy who controls the teleportation platform.
Cirvante
2021-09-22 20:47:00 +0000 UTCIt's gonna take Rain days to scrape him out of his essence fans and sneezing his remains out of his nose. Steampunk tech is dangerous shit, man.
Cirvante
2021-09-21 05:59:28 +0000 UTCOh yea with a cool and snappy title like "The Fleshsinger" this dude has to at least be a 20-man raid boss.
Starless
2021-09-20 18:31:11 +0000 UTCAlso altering someone with chaotic essence while the target is juiced up on pure essence from killing a blue should also be permanent. Luckily our resident madlad MC should be uniquely resistant/immune to this type of malpractice since his core no longer draws in all the surrounding essence automatically. Any foreign pure essence introduced to his soul will end up being stored/diluted by his own legendary dynamo sized storage tanks before eventually hitting his core.
Starless
2021-09-20 17:42:45 +0000 UTCIntresting. I'm guessing the trick is that healing(altering) people with chaotic essence is temporary since it eventually gets purified and expelled. Conversely, healing(altering) someone using only purified essence is permanent since it actually gets absorbed into the core. This also explains why Rain's permanent physical changes only started when he began juicing up his core.
Starless
2021-09-20 06:09:31 +0000 UTCDefinitely anticipating the next time Lerith shows up. I don’t think Senescent is done with such a interesting class and family. Also makes you wonder how many classes there are that are unique like Val's or Lerith's.
Tycho Green
2021-09-20 04:53:35 +0000 UTCAll the talk of making people fit the image of their soul makes me wonder about the consequences of Rain's soul avatars, If he spends all his time in his soul envisioning himself as a Gigantic Metal Lich, will that ever affect how he imagines himself, and therefore his actual form in any way? Also, if that soul altering requires Lerith to invade a soul to make his changes... Just imagining him invading Rain's soul realm after he has had time to work on it, the whole thing a giant fortress of conceptualized imperviousness and Rain looking down upon the invader as one would look upon an ant.... its a fun image.
Mutabulis
2021-09-20 00:58:46 +0000 UTCoh yea most definitely, but it dosent really matter in the end, does it? :P
Tomer Yud
2021-09-19 23:14:08 +0000 UTCWait a minute, was Lerith “actually” hot? It’s been established that he has been able to make cosmetic changes (bone, muscle, skin structures and such) before meeting Ameliah so it isn’t impossible that he made some changes to himself to make his charisma better (people are more inclined to have a favorable impression of aesthetically pleasing people).
Conor McGroarty
2021-09-19 20:04:03 +0000 UTCDamn those feels! Well done, sir.
Dee
2021-09-19 19:34:32 +0000 UTCHey! Who's chopping onions?
Doodlyboy15
2021-09-19 16:28:37 +0000 UTCI think this is your best chapter yet.
Silvertooth09
2021-09-19 16:05:21 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
SenescentSoul
2021-09-19 16:00:51 +0000 UTCTypo: Dependant
Charles Frayne
2021-09-19 15:37:40 +0000 UTCI was hoping for the class up but I think this is your best chapter yet.
Michael Hughes
2021-09-19 15:04:15 +0000 UTCI don't remember the exact name. But the person was "one of their own." So a member of the watch. Lerith was a Freelord, so it wasn't him. If you want to find the chapter, it was after Rain got trapped in the barrier but before he went into the Fells. They were discussing it as they were watching Rain use refrigerate while running around, I believe.
Ziggy
2021-09-19 15:02:50 +0000 UTCBeautiful chapter, best yet even.
M
2021-09-19 14:57:58 +0000 UTCDoes anyone else remember whether it was Lerith that some members of the Fel Sadanis watch talked about having bad memories of putting down?
Tohron
2021-09-19 14:28:13 +0000 UTCMad props to Ameliah for turning out so kind despite her environment. But I imagine there must have been at least *some* people acting as positive influence in her life after she escaped from Brightside. Otherwise what reason would she have from ever changing her mindset of having to fuck people over just to survive?
Gyoshi _
2021-09-19 11:31:51 +0000 UTCalmost thought it was rains class up with your initial comment on long time coming
Jeppe Fiig
2021-09-19 10:22:40 +0000 UTCHonestly, re-reading the chapter. The part that is absolutely awful is the transformation of Ameliah. It is really, really sickening. He basically treated her like a pet and not even one that you treat well
CentaureHeart
2021-09-19 10:10:28 +0000 UTCMan that is one fucked up dude. It is a miracle that Ameliah is not more fucked up by this. She probably still is, good thing Rain and Tallheart are there. That's not something you can heal by yourself. Great chapter SS, thanks :)
CentaureHeart
2021-09-19 10:01:54 +0000 UTCReally well executed, by the way. I look forward to seeing how Rain responds.
2021-09-19 09:49:52 +0000 UTC117: "“He still has it,” Ameliah said, a bitter note twisting her voice. “He knew I wouldn’t kill him to get it back, so he just kept it. And it was a rare one, too, even among accolades. It granted a skill.”"
2021-09-19 09:49:19 +0000 UTCSS is growing up to be a real author. It's great to see.
lol
2021-09-19 09:28:28 +0000 UTCwanna make a bet lerith will broke his paling on Rain ?
Thenais
2021-09-19 09:19:10 +0000 UTC*snuffel* what a story. :.) Also, cant realy see the monster part. I mean, expect the body modifications or the real monster on the run.
D
2021-09-19 09:13:01 +0000 UTCWell that happened... well I doubt Lerith is dead considering he is a named character with such potential for an antagonist. It will be interesting to see his transformations likely not working on Rain as Rain has entered and is in the process of mastering his soul. Thus his resistance to outside influence and such bs should be strong. It would be funny to see Lerith losing due to someone mastering themselves; a guy who spent so long twisting and contorting the bodies and souls of others, never bothered to mastered himself, losing to someone who has.
Conor McGroarty
2021-09-19 09:06:32 +0000 UTCUncertain Saviour
jiecut
2021-09-19 07:16:03 +0000 UTC"When I finally unlocked my silver class and saw the name the system picked for me" Ooooh, that's a mean tease SS, now I want to know what the name is...or at least a reminder if I've forgotten from some prior chapter
Racavis
2021-09-19 06:59:06 +0000 UTClerith, you had it all, but threw it away, you sux. Rip once Rain gets to you ;o
Thenais
2021-09-19 06:41:19 +0000 UTCWell done. Good buildup and payoff
Eric Hartz
2021-09-19 06:34:00 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-09-19 06:24:45 +0000 UTCMy guess is she was already beautiful or would grow to be beautiful, but Lerith was molding her appearance after his preferences. Plus the changes that fix things like scars or damaged skin would stay and 90% of beautification is removing imperfections like that. Getting rid of acne scars, aligning a broken nose, clearing out clogged pores etc.
Kendelle Trotter
2021-09-19 06:15:29 +0000 UTCBet the Empire nabbed and broke him, he's been experimenting and making super soldiers ever since. 👹👺😈🐔
JC
2021-09-19 06:14:29 +0000 UTCI am confused, did she reverted to her original look completely? There were several scenes that implied her beauty is more than outstanding, which lead ppl to theorise its work of a healer, so it would fit greatly. But then, if even something as minor as freckles came back, then that would mean everything was undone and she was just naturaly that beautiful? Or of the minor changes only ones she didn't like faded?
Veritas Dolor
2021-09-19 05:53:27 +0000 UTCI'm kind of curious about how the known skills part would work with her silver class. Would she be able to level every skill and get something beyond a legendary gold class simply for having every skill at level 11?
Sean
2021-09-19 05:40:56 +0000 UTCI was a bit torn recently. The last chapter or two had Ameliah's thoughts on her actions in Brightside/Lerith seem to noticeably shift a bit off what it seemed prior. But daaaamn. The payoff was great. I assume one of the edits involved how Ameliah thought of the guy that ran the teleporter as a nice dude that gave her a big discount for using her own mana. I distinctly remember that and would definitely clash with this unless the asshole mentioned this chapter in charge of the teleporter died first or something. Also, +1 to ALL SKILLS? Good lord. She really undersold how amazing that accolade was before now. And would have been perfect to shore up some of the weakness in her build. And that was just from a silver lair? Accolades are absurd.
Ziggy
2021-09-19 05:29:03 +0000 UTCThat was long overdue and very nice. And finally a chapter without crunch too!
Sebastian Lachs
2021-09-19 05:26:02 +0000 UTCVery well foreshadowed too
Robert
2021-09-19 05:23:04 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! I love a book with patience to build and foreshadow, and the sense not to keep the suspense forever. Delve is one of my favorite things on the Internet these days.
Yshua
2021-09-19 05:22:02 +0000 UTCHoly shit. This was incredible.
Fabhar
2021-09-19 05:20:32 +0000 UTCThey didn't though. They mentioned them alongside destitute and beggars. People resorting to selling themselves in poor socioeconomic situations is something that's been around forever. It's not exactly "escort services" if it's a waif blowing dudes in the alleys of a slum for pocket change.
matticide FOWD
2021-09-19 05:17:16 +0000 UTCI would refrain from using the term whore or prostitution in general as an insult, but overall enjoyed the chapter, thank you
Cameron Lerch
2021-09-19 05:09:00 +0000 UTC