Chapter 109: Meeting God.
Added 2023-06-14 02:11:22 +0000 UTCComments
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Kasme 12
2025-04-18 03:27:33 +0000 UTCI recommend you add a few "Yo"s for Eminem in his dialog. He always says that IRL
Nightshadeq8
2023-06-17 00:58:39 +0000 UTCnah, i will mention it when he used it
Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam
2023-06-15 14:39:50 +0000 UTCYes! thank you !
Skarpi
2023-06-15 14:37:25 +0000 UTCyeah i'm finishing up and waiting for my editor
Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam
2023-06-15 14:36:25 +0000 UTCis there a chapter for today?
Skarpi
2023-06-15 14:31:43 +0000 UTCYes!!!!!!
Oni
2023-06-15 01:23:24 +0000 UTCcan you mention when he's using his soul Voice or is he always using it while singing ?
noyibo
2023-06-14 17:33:49 +0000 UTCI like the idea of him being Domβs actual family. Though it might be more realistic to make him lettys cousin or something.
Ouki's Lips
2023-06-14 14:50:33 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter, I can see Taylor thinking she was cheated on by Mathers here if it releases first lol.
Ototsu_Yume
2023-06-14 14:42:16 +0000 UTCLove the rap inclusion. Great job my dude
SaltySpitton_
2023-06-14 13:31:09 +0000 UTCLove this book so much I really hope ed ends up with Taylor Iβd love to see more of her
Nathan Richards
2023-06-14 12:42:35 +0000 UTCYou should 100% have ed sometime when he thinks heβs in his studio alone sing βenormous penisβ by da Vinci notebook and have someone hear him as a joke
Joseph
2023-06-14 12:39:37 +0000 UTCThank you for chapter, it was great and I wish I could read more but I won't pressure you because I prefer you being fine, than reading more chapters. Also wouldn't the title for the chapter "Meeting A God" be better?
KingSpy25i .
2023-06-14 09:11:22 +0000 UTCHas the story timeline already included the music video of "Taylor Swift - You Belong With Me"? ( it was released on 16 Jun 2009) if not you can make Ed act on the music video π€
noyibo
2023-06-14 06:26:33 +0000 UTCTo tell you the truth for me almost anybody other than Hayley would be a good match for him and again, this is my opinion only, mostly because I think that she may be a little to wild for him, in what way? I can't explain it, mostly a feeling.
KingSpy25i .
2023-06-14 05:00:41 +0000 UTCYeah, can you please write by who because I just looked it up? And there are a lot of songs with the same name. Edit: The closest thing to what you are saying is one from a artist named "Munn" and it's pretty good π
KingSpy25i .
2023-06-14 04:57:52 +0000 UTCI hope not, I'm on team Tayward
Marc Daniel Manalili
2023-06-14 03:34:17 +0000 UTCby ?
noyibo
2023-06-14 03:33:38 +0000 UTCCan you get him to sing βcan you here meβ when he starts to get over his problems
Kylan Trinh
2023-06-14 03:28:47 +0000 UTCis Hailie gonna appear? She's about the same age as Ed when Not Afraid was released, i think. Thanks for the chapter
Skarpi
2023-06-14 03:10:05 +0000 UTCPoor taylor and you including FF here also?
Wrobe06117
2023-06-14 03:04:45 +0000 UTCOk, my only critic in this chapter is that M is never late, he treats his projects like common salary man schedule. 8 in and out in 4 and he doesn't compromise in this sched even when collaborating with other artists. Also please make Ed a relativeβa cousin may beβ of Dom, cause I really want to see(read?) him using his driving skills more.
Marc Daniel Manalili
2023-06-14 03:01:45 +0000 UTCI don't know what to expect from the "Camila" part of the story π
noyibo
2023-06-14 02:40:49 +0000 UTCWill ed and hayle have a moment at the party?
Matias Arce
2023-06-14 02:38:50 +0000 UTCauthor is really mastering the art of cliffhanger
noyibo
2023-06-14 02:37:23 +0000 UTCAs a Latino with "Castro" as a surname and with an uncle in jail for drug traffic, this chapter was wild~
Ramzawing04
2023-06-14 02:33:29 +0000 UTC
