Call of the Void chapter 28
Added 2026-01-29 17:38:59 +0000 UTC
Comments
Well sure, but thats because Kai is an SI. Leon is a native of DC hes just an original character. The butterfly thing doesn't work as well for him.
Malcolm Tent
2026-02-07 06:28:21 +0000 UTCThe way of introducing more adversary based on the butterfly effect of him derailing canon in this story is flowing a lot better that the latest DC fic where the MC’ main opposition is his grandfather, which felt forced into that position.
Zerak
2026-02-07 06:25:40 +0000 UTCMy guy is is cursed Kisame and Itachi. Guy can take Kisame. Maybe he can blackmail itachi into leaving. Say he knows he’s a secret spy for konoha
MyAfroAteMyDog
2026-01-31 11:34:29 +0000 UTCI like it, I do hope Itachi doesn't turn up just yet, maybe Kisame can sprinkle some bits of foreshadowing but otherwise it would feel a little too much, I am curious how the Harpoon will stake up against Kisame because doubtlessly they'll fight for a scene or two, don't think he'd win obviously
Son-Of-Scorn
2026-01-29 22:19:41 +0000 UTCDoes he want cry of the phoenix to deal with Haku's mirrors? this story is going strong. I'm desperetly waiting for more. I love it.
Armand Sellier
2026-01-29 18:31:04 +0000 UTC
