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A Novel Approach chapter 52

Returning home and arming up

A Novel Approach chapter 52

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A bit of foreshadowing about the dad there...nothing special, I'm sure...lol

Creature of Grimm

Nah. I couldn't justify that story beat. Conversations to upgrades to conversation doesn't flow as well. I think it works better as is.

Malcolm Tent

> "made up some story about Blake needing to lie low from an abusive boyfriend." This seems like a "show, don't tell" moment.

Joshua Graham


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