A Novel Approach chapter 52
Added 2024-12-19 20:27:43 +0000 UTCReturning home and arming up
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A bit of foreshadowing about the dad there...nothing special, I'm sure...lol
Creature of Grimm
2024-12-28 21:47:37 +0000 UTCNah. I couldn't justify that story beat. Conversations to upgrades to conversation doesn't flow as well. I think it works better as is.
Malcolm Tent
2024-12-20 01:01:32 +0000 UTC> "made up some story about Blake needing to lie low from an abusive boyfriend." This seems like a "show, don't tell" moment.
Joshua Graham
2024-12-20 00:58:07 +0000 UTC
