Cumbunny 14 - Rough and Raw Edition
Added 2025-12-02 04:15:38 +0000 UTCGood Evening everyone!
Hot off the presses, I have the latest chapter of Cumbunny. Sorry for the mild delay on this one. Each chapter seems to get longer and more complex as the end nears.
Speaking of which, chapter 15 will be the finale of this series! We are almost there!
As usual lately, this chapter is the rough draft version, with plenty of warts. If you notice any major issues or plot holes, be sure to let me know.
This chapter... well you'll see, it's kind of a doozy. Let me know what you think in the comments. Can't wait to show you the end!
Comments
I think the dirty talking cuck scene was really hot. I agree that the transformations are hot too, it would be awesome for gene to turn lizzie into a blonde like her sister too
Pmdy
2025-12-10 17:19:12 +0000 UTCMan if this goes into a pathetic cuckhold/jackrabbit end its going to be so disappointing. The best part of this series is the further corrupting of Lizzy/Kimmy. Cuckholding doesnt do that at all. It would be significantly more satisfying to see them break free of Gene only to have fallen so far they are irredeemably corrupted. There's also still a lot of room for physical corruption. The clothes and piercings on Lizzy are great but it could be so much more....
DC
2025-12-09 23:09:32 +0000 UTCsuper hot to see how far Lizzy/Kimmy have come in embracing their roles so naturally, even if they think they're resisting. The scene where she was teasing David and getting into the cuck fantasy herself was sooo nice. And Kim acted so shamelessly compared to even just a few chapters ago - their progression has been really well done
Annie
2025-12-08 19:22:49 +0000 UTCThe silver lining is when I *finish* to the erotic cuckolding fetish ;P. Gooooo Gene!
Deprivedone
2025-12-05 21:49:07 +0000 UTCLike a few here I am hoping for a satisfying "good ending" where there corrupting is total BUT the tables are turned. I love a good NTR story but the best ones are where there's at least a positive silver lining for me and not just a void of tragedy where evil just swallows everything.
Nograv
2025-12-05 02:32:34 +0000 UTCI bet this was part of their plan
Chris N
2025-12-03 22:32:42 +0000 UTCAlso, the knowledge that Dave has turned the tables is hidden from the readers. We only learn the truth in a flashback just as Gene expects his greatest triumph.
Steve G
2025-12-03 16:52:29 +0000 UTCI don't need a response from the author, because that could give the whole game away should I be right. But my thought is that when Lizzy had to take the phone call that Dave clearly had to know who was calling. He secretly listened in on Lizzie's side of the conversation and knows the jig is up. But Lizzy does not know he heard. So when the oil arrives, Dave manages to find a way to control the vial temporarily. Maybe they've been waiting so long that they need to go to the bathroom. Whatever. Dave has already found both a receptacle for the Mjolkhare oil and secreted enough olive oil into a second container for its replacement. Once he performs his covert switch he lets Lizzy have the supposed magic oil. She believes she is following Gene's orders and she is devastated. But Dave knows he has to keep his secret, from Lizzy and Kimmie, because he knows he can only trust himself. When he finally comes over to be 'cucked' by Gene he has a present for the creep to show how far he has fallen. And although he probably will have to eat or drink something of Gene's to keep him unsuspicious, he does so to ensure his nemesis falls into the trap he has set.
Steve G
2025-12-03 16:50:04 +0000 UTCI think he knows it can't happen. Without the oil, she wouldn't be anywhere near him. Basically Gene has "cheated" this entire time. Without that substance, he's nothing. Despite the appendage between his legs. The real obsession Gene has cultivated has been David. His entire animus is just trying to have had what David has. Which Gene can't ever have.
Hannah Baird
2025-12-03 02:41:57 +0000 UTCYes! More Team Dave. Gene is ultimately pathetic, and antagonists without any vulnerability, is boring. They can at least get knocked down a peg, maybe not have "lost" but consequences are always fascinating.
Hannah Baird
2025-12-03 02:40:11 +0000 UTCI think turning David into the cum eater is such an obvious direction and while I originally liked it from a perversion perspective, I'm disliking how Gene has the upper hand or "always seems to know" what the girls plans are. I'm not saying David had to turn gene into a cum eater... Though that would be karma for what Gene did... But at minimum pull Eliza out of his mental hold.
Sissy Denise
2025-12-02 22:26:04 +0000 UTCMan, I've changed my mind on my position for the ending on this. I want Dave to win now, and have his own little cumbunny wife to enjoy. Fuck gene. I originally voted for a gene victory on the poll but as the story has gone on, I just kinda want him to lose more and more. But I still want eliza to lose too...
Space
2025-12-02 22:23:29 +0000 UTCSame. It's been an outstanding series.
Hannah Baird
2025-12-02 22:04:52 +0000 UTCSame. It would be subversive and actually highly unique for Gene to actually end up at the level he started at. The more the series has progressed the more it's visible that Gene is just...jealous. That's it. He couldn't do anything without the oil. I feel the same way about untouchable antagonists.
Hannah Baird
2025-12-02 22:04:19 +0000 UTCLooks like Gene is winning right now. But I guess there are 1 or 2 more twists and turns. Otherwise he could have finished the story today. I hope David will have some victory in the end and Kims plan to get Eliza free works out. Can´t have Gene have winning all the way.
F
2025-12-02 22:04:00 +0000 UTCIt is absolutely wild how dynamic it is. I love when a story is actually hard to predict.
Hannah Baird
2025-12-02 22:02:24 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, but what happened to Gene’s obsession with Eliza and her love from David? I thought he wanted he to love him
Jackfrost
2025-12-02 21:56:30 +0000 UTCI for one am going to stop trying to predict where this story is going and just roll with it lol
Laura
2025-12-02 21:32:26 +0000 UTCI'm hoping the girls trick David into being the cum eater. It would be much hotter than Gene finding out and handling it. Not interested in seeing Gene turned into a cuck or cum eater etc. that is actually a instant boner killer for me. *crosses fingers*
Deprivedone
2025-12-02 20:26:09 +0000 UTCI'm really siding with David in this story now. I'd hope to see another trick/switch where he knows there is some game being played against him and he swaps one of the vials before Lizzie gets her chance. Idk, on one hand David becoming a cum eater is hot, but I also would love to seen Gene get knocked down a peg. This story has him in God mode and I'm not a fan of that
Sissy Denise
2025-12-02 19:41:17 +0000 UTCI really hope that the entire “escape plan” winds up being a ruse Gene and Kim came up with and tricked Eliza into doing to get David in this position. Hopefully next chapter is Eliza fully crumbling and Kim and Gene showing David while David thinks it will turn but it never does.
Jeffrey
2025-12-02 14:17:01 +0000 UTCA good question! It's definitely something Eliza has to deal with. I'll be going into this tension at the beginning of chapter 15, but the short answer is that, thanks to how the got the oil, they now believe they need to dose Gene. And, thanks to his suspicious nature, they aren't sure if more subtle delivery methods would work.
Rabble Laid
2025-12-02 12:18:36 +0000 UTCLove the chapter, a little confused though on why they have to go back to Genes now to do the plan. Once they get the oil, couldn’t they simply just use it on Eliza now without involving Gene? Ik Gene told Eliza to do this, but it still doesn’t make sense for David to think he still has to go there now even though they have the oil
BandJProductions1
2025-12-02 11:45:41 +0000 UTCTerrific chapter. Can't wait for the final installment.
Ross
2025-12-02 10:33:37 +0000 UTC
