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PSA and Update

Hello everyone!

Just a quick heads up that The Bet 23 is back up after being temporarily hidden due to tripping the filter. Get your votes in!

I am all in on drafting Cumbunny 13 this week, and having a blast with it. I think that as series get close to their conclusion, it gets harder and harder to please all readers, because the possibilities of where the series might go start collapsing rapidly. That being said, I'm super happy with my outline for this chapter, and I think it takes the story in a really interesting direction heading for the conclusion.

I hope that when it releases, you all agree!

Comments

Just do your thing. We have helped guide it. Now you finish it.

Tony Midwood

To be fair with the oil would it even be necessary for Dave to 'step up"? The oil does all of the heavy lifting in terms of attraction.

Xehanort

I would love to see a scenario where gene ends up winning and converting Dave as well, as was his initial plan. I think since the story started off with a dark undercurrent with a cuck and bull theme, that should be maintained in the end. Excited to see where you take it though

Jackfrost

I would love to see their plan to obtain and use more of the magic oil to break Gene's hold on them. But they both are clearly addicted not only to the oil but their need to be submissive in humiliating ways. It could be hot if they use the oil with Dave's semen, since Kim cannot accept such subservience to some stranger, preferring a relationship with her brother to anything else. But I am still not sure how Dave will fulfill their newly discovered needs. He just doesn't seem like the kind of guy who could step up to the plate in this way. Perhaps he will blossom, but I fear he will come up short.

Steve G


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