Cumbunny 12 - Rough and Raw Edition
Added 2025-10-01 00:53:53 +0000 UTCGood evening everyone!
I just finished drafting Cumbunny 12 mere minutes ago!
Normally, I have a careful process of reading through every word and fixing minor mistakes and awkward wordings. This time, because we are already at the end of the month, I decided would do things a little differently.
Tonight, I will be releasing a version which only had a quick machine-based spellcheck done. It may be a little below my normal editing standards. In other words, it will probably have some embarrassing mistakes.
If that doesn't sound appealing, you can wait a few days, and I will release a more polished version up to my usual standards.
You will immediately see why I had trouble getting this one out the door in time. It's over double the length of a normal chapter!
One note about the content of chapter 12:
I decided to go with what I consider a minor retcon. A long while ago, Gene mentioned that Eliza's anniversary with David was coming up "In two weeks". Although it makes the timeline a little unbelievable, I decided the narrative possibilities of using the anniversary were too juicy to pass up, and in this chapter, the anniversary is still upcoming.
Just wanted to get out ahead of that in case anyone noticed!
Please let me know if you enjoyed the chapter in the comments! This one is pretty eventful!
Comments
When will the final version of Chapter 12 be available?
Pascal
2025-10-08 15:35:53 +0000 UTCDidn't stick the landing on this one in my opinion. I don't think he should have found out this way. Personally I think it would have been better to have had a few escapades behind his back before having the affair discovered publicly by all at work at a work party or the anniversary party. Maybe Gene forcing her to make David invite him before both sneak off and everyone keep asking where each of them are before they hear them. Or right when they are about to catch Lizzie maybe they only find him dicking down Kim to drag it out longer.
Mike
2025-10-07 03:59:54 +0000 UTC
