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Cumbunny Part 10

Good evening everyone!

Here we have it, Cumbunny 10, right under the wire for the end of the month. Because of some crazy stuff in my personal life, this took a lot of blood, sweat, and tears to prepare on time, so I certainly hope you enjoy it.

As always, I love hearing your feedback, thoughts, and praise in the comments. I'd love to get any feedback I can to improve!

Enjoy!

Comments

I was surprised Kim didn't get her cum from Lizzie's pussy.

Michael McKeon

It feels like Dave and possibly other innocent bystanders should have at least accidently consumed some extra cum being stored from time to time. It doesn't have to be the addictive oil but certainly Davey must accidently consume this from time to time?

Deprivedone

Hey man. I love this story. When is the next chapter coming out ?

alexander1089

Have caught up now. Superb. Enjoyed the nod to Coleridge

Terminal Itch

Yes, 7 is the next chapter. Sorry, Chapter 8 wasn't placed in the collection, but I have updated that now, so you should be able to find it.

Rabble Laid

Hi. Just joined. Read Cumbunny 1-6 on Literotica today, and am eager to continue, but don't know where to start. Does 7 on here take up where 6 on Lit ends? I've downloaded 9 and 10 as well. But where's 8? What am I missing here? Any help appreciated

Terminal Itch

It would be great if Dave to save his marriage secretly hired a dominatrix to teach him how to be a real man. Or maybe he snaps and a dark hidden side slowly comes out surprising Eliza. She believed she knew her husband. Now she's not so sure. Give it a twist πŸ˜‰

Tony Midwood

I hate the way the character Dave is treated. He is described as a character that is far too weak and pathetic. This makes the ending far too predictable, with Eliza's certain betrayal, as she feels nothing more than pity for her husband at best. For me, the only thing that can really pull Eliza out of the ultra-toxic grip that Gene has on her is for Dave to become a man again to the point that it literally shakes Eliza. Otherwise, the sex scenes with Gene are of course very exciting, but this guy is still a disgusting piece of scum, and I hope for a dreadful ending for him, even though I have no illusions about it since the majority want to see him win.

Pascal

I also like the idea of Kim being introduced as Gene's girlfriend and Eliza spending alot of time with Kim.

Tiggy

Fabulous work! For the next chapter I hope that we get to experience poor Davey being further humiliated, broken and submitting to Gene! Unknowingly licking cum out of Eliza’s pussy would be an added bonus.

Dennis


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