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Cumbunny 8

Hello Everyone! I am pleased to release Cumbunny part 8! Let me know what you think with comments and likes! I'm going to get to work on the

Hello Everyone!

I am pleased to release Cumbunny part 8!

Let me know what you think with comments and likes!

I'm going to get to work on the next part of the Bet, but it might be as late as Monday, since I've been a little sick.

I hope you enjoy!

Comments

Eureka! The penny has dropped re the name of the oil. Embarrassed that it took me so long

Terminal Itch

I Love it, please add more Eliza and David. Eliza fully submitting and giving David the oil is what I am waiting for!

Jason Berg

The slow burn with another bunny makes me so eager to see the explosive climax when Kimmy meets Lizzy. The Daddy kink is πŸ₯΅. I hope at the end of the story there’s an epilogue with Gene enjoying the fruits of his labor. Maybe another scene at the strip club where a new bunny gets initated by Kimmy and Lizzy a flashback to Mitsy and Bitsy. The insight to Gene was glorious. I love the restraint. So delicious. David has no chance!

Bunny

Im interested in the main couple eliza and david. Too many new characters and kim, im not interested in. Maybe should be a different story?

Schnuffles

Maybe she presents him as her BF during a double date with Eliza and David. Bonus if Eliza fights for their side with David absolutely bewildered.

ResoluteFox

Another good chapter. It did, however, feel a bit of resemblance to what Toxic Attraction has unfortunately become from a pacing perspective... Like one chapter focuses too much on one small bit of the story, so much to the point that it feels less "setting the scene" and more "draw it out to release more chapters." I think, just be careful of that moving forward. Your other chapters paced really well and covered enough ground in the overall story. Keep up the good work like those!

Jsue

It would be hysterical if Gene eventually presents Kim as his GF to David. Hoping that Eliza ends up stripping or in porn.

Tiggy

Could you put this in a format that's easier to read?

Mark Albright

Enjoyed this chapter detailing Kim's descent. She's beginning to feel it's 'Frank' is who can give her what she needs. Would be hot if she was too far gone when finding out Frank's real name to care. Would have liked maybe a short paragraph or two about how Eliza is dealing with David and Sidenote: It says Zane instead of Frank on page 5

ResoluteFox


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