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The Bet Snap Poll

Hey everyone!

As I worked on writing The Bet part 10, an idea came to me for a little twist to add to the plot. It sounded hot to me, but I wasn't sure if it would be a good fit for this point in the plot.

Instead of making a call myself, I thought, hey, why not present the choice to you all, since this is a fan-driven story?

So the option that won in part 9 was Zane sending Dan a gift subscription to his porn site. I thought it might be interesting as a little twist of the knife if the login information Zane sends Dan is for a "Beta Edition" version of the site, where all the female nudity is censored. This would obviously also come into play later in the plot when perhaps someone else ends up on the site.

Or this idea could still be used, but would come up later. So, in other words, Dan would get a normal account now, then Zane would flip a switch the censor the videos later to torment Dan.

What do you think? Good idea, or going off the rails a little? I would probably need to act on the results of this poll tomorrow to get the chapter out ASAP, so get your votes in!

Comments

My thought is Dan gets a 'limited' subscription that includes a subset with the older content, requiring him to pay to get full access. And then a premium tier he pays even more for that gives access to latest the addition.

Steve G

A removable tattoo? Just picture this the porn is censored but you do get to see the letter Z in a certain location Dan then will be checking his wife while having a shower or maybe this is in bed The body looks like his wife got the same hair but this woman in the porn is a lot more naughtier and when he cannot find the letter Z is happy relaxed what he doesn't realise is it is Zane and Claire teasing him because the tattoo is removable so they wash it off. For weeks possibly months this woman could be doing some incredibly naughty filthy stuff it'd be funny later on when he found out it was his wife. The big question is how would he find out It would be boring if they told him directly. I think dance partner hill work to surprise her she's been working late the last few weeks some flowers some food he has a key to get in. He could be the one that surprised as he sees his wife tied to the chair legs spread nipple clips blindfolded a gag or maybe over her desk Her ass shining red with handprints that would be awesome 😁

Tony Midwood


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