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Supporter Release: Cumbunny 7!

Hello Everyone!

Sorry there was no "The Bet" update this weekend, I have been working hard at writing Cumbunny 7. And I am pleased to say I have finished!

This chapter is the start of a couple of plot threads I am super excited for! Would love to hear any comments or questions! As always, if you have any idea for how this chapter could be improved, I would love to hear them, because I usually do make a couple of changes before public release.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy the chapter!

Comments

Don't know what I'm hoping for more. Kim not fully converted but finding out Eliza's responsible for starting her on the journey and that being the breaking point or her going full Cumbunny and not caring at all when introducing her brother to her new man. Either way, really excited for chapter 8.

ResoluteFox

Diving into the ownership theme, wondering if a tattoo is in order…

Bunny

I know you mentioned this being 10 parts. That feels too short! Would hate to rush through the character development and world building. There’s so much exciting depth! Still would like to learn more about what makes Gene tick. He feels too one dimensional.

Bunny

Another awesome chapter! I like how Eliza is realizing her submissive arousal isn't purely oil-driven. Even if she succeeds in breaking Gene's control, how much of his training is permanently embedded in her? I'm not sure if I want the Cumbunnies to win or lose, but I love reading it all unfold.

Nylav

I love how you worked out Kim's further exposure. Did you already mention her job at the donor clinic, or did that come to you on the fly? Wonderful setup!

Steve G


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