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Cumbunny Part 4 Final Cut

Good Evening!

I have the final cut of Cumbunny here for you! It was just submitted to Literotica, so hopefully it will be up within a few days.

No massive changes this time, just a short added scene of David freaking out a little over Eliza's slutty new wardrobe as well as small rewordings and tune-ups throughout.

Thanks for reading!

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i came across this story last Thursday on Literotica and was immedeatly hooked. It also encouraged me to grab a sub and before of course create a patreon account in the first place. Especially Part 2 was very intriguing read. Of Course I liked the Scene under the desk. ;) I wouldΒ΄ve loved to know what exactly David had to say in this apology speech, but Maybe better to leave some room for Imagination. I like the humiliation and bullying of poor Davi and the Scene where she by accident uttered the Gene made him is bitch. I wish david would be a bit more defiant. I really love the bullying-cuckolding fetish, but for me the down Point of most stories in this genre is, when the cuck is finally completely submitted and cucked in front of his eyes. The anticipation, the build to the final act of humiliation is often great but then many authors tend to either end the Story or Keep to try further humiliating the cuck, but you can only take so much from him. Their needs to be a little struggle. I feel that you got the Right approach to end such a Story or continue further. I myself donΒ΄t know if I prefer a good, a bad or a neutral ending. I just buckle up for the ride you prepaired for us and look Forward to Part 6/F

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Read this on Literotica, it encouraged me to grab a sub. Loved it. Cum addiction is such a fun kink. Normally Im not a fan of the whole "Bully/Cuck" thing but it works.

Lilly


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