Cumbunny Part 3: Final Cut
Added 2025-03-05 00:41:58 +0000 UTCHello Everyone!
Cumbunny part three is being submitted to Literotica tonight with a few modest additions to build toward the later plot. If anyone is interested, I'm posting it here for you to check out a few days early!
Change Log:
Smoothing and rewording to improve flow throughout
Grammar and spelling fixes.
New interaction between Gene and Eliza through text to help spur her to ditch the date with her husband.
Brand new scene of David calling Kim to talk when he is home feeling lonely.
Additional details added in the final shower scene to reflect the fact that this is the first time Gene and Eliza are seeing each other fully naked!
I hope you enjoy!
Comments
Didn't scroll down enough yet! Great work! The downfall of Kim and gene's continued free use of elize sounds like a great step forward. Lot's of directions to go. Maybe another club to the club to see Betsy's progress.
Vex
2025-03-12 01:02:51 +0000 UTCAll I know is i read this story today and I'm addicted. Please continue the slow burn. Maybe next chapter gene brings up that she needs to start dressing slutty? Has to remove her panties before entering his office. Saturdays are now reserved for sex club trips. Etc.
Vex
2025-03-11 21:30:42 +0000 UTCWell, all I can say is I hope as soon as possible. A while ago I did promise a short sequel to "Intro to Interracial Relations" which got put on hold for five parts of Cumbunny, so I would like to get that done first.
Rabble Laid
2025-03-05 02:32:09 +0000 UTCAwesome! When can we expect part 6? No rush of course just wondering
hodor
2025-03-05 02:21:45 +0000 UTC
