Patreon Exclusive: Cumbunny Part D!
Added 2025-02-06 03:30:29 +0000 UTCHello!
Please find attached Cumbunny Part D!
This story has gotten crazy long compared to my original plans for it. I should be able to finish my original plans for "Cumbunny Part 1" after part E (although that won't end the entire story). Maybe I'll make a post after part E showing my original outline and explaining how it went from supposedly a short story to a full length series!
Full disclosure: I wrote a significant chunk of this story while sick with the flu. So that may have impacted it a little. If you see any flaws or ways it could improve, let me know in the comments! I'd love to get it whipped into shape if anyone feels like it is lacking.
I want to raise one other change that I'm thinking about for my Patreon model.
A lot of creators charge for their Patreons. In other words, only paid members are allowed to see any posts at all.
I have always found that it is worth it to me to open all my posts to all members, paid or free. I value the feedback I get through polls, and I think it's been helpful in getting more people to check out my work.
But, on the other hand, I am super grateful to the people who choose to sign up as paid members and help to make this hobby pay for the large amount of time I spend on it. I do feel bad that those generous people don't get any kind of reward or show of appreciation for chucking a couple of bucks my way.
So I am considering a compromise that would reward paid members while still making sure everyone has a chance to see my work. Here's how it would work: Patreon exclusive stories after "Cumbunny" will be exclusive to paid members for one week. Following that week, the stories will be released to all members paid and free, and stay Patreon-exclusive for a further three weeks before heading to Literotica.
I'm hoping this strikes a balance where generous patrons feel like they are getting a little something in thanks, and other readers don't feel like they are getting shafted. Let me know what you think in the poll. The last thing I want is for people to feel like I'm cheating them.
I would also love to hear any thoughts or insights on the story!
Poll: How do you feel about the proposed Patreon changes?
Comments
If you really do want to make changes and haven't already (I'm a paid member) then maybe keep each new chapter locked for 10 days, but make the chapter downloads only available to paying members. Story wise, I absolutely love it even though Gene is NOT a middle aged older man...LOL at only 40!
Jay Muney
2025-07-09 07:05:55 +0000 UTCI really enjoy the dynamic of Eliza, gene and and David. I’m not sure how I feel about Carl being added to as a regular character if that was the plan. If Eliza were to break free from Gene.
Ryan Reyes
2025-02-16 16:34:24 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this chapter, especially how Eliza (albeit reluctantly and under certain influences) moved close to embracing the true cuckolding of David. I also loved the development of Eliza's "bimbofication" in front of her colleagues, especially before Ms. Harrington. Excellent writing Rabblelaid!
Terry Martin
2025-02-08 17:01:10 +0000 UTCI liked part D but it felt a bit like it was setting up for the next part rather than much really happening here. The best parts for me are the interactions between Gene and Lizzie and this update felt like we had less of that. The gradual change in clothing and the internal struggle Lizzie has with it was fun and well written but I guess I just am impatient for the inevitable fucking. If I can make a request please try to include anal sex at some point. I feel like if you are going to turn Lizzie into a depraved slut you should go all the way and considering she's addicted to swallowing his cum and is willing to eat ass and change her dress to appear as a slutty bimbo then just having a pussy fuck with a cream pie will feel too vanilla.
CabFredDead
2025-02-06 13:03:41 +0000 UTCI understand making your Patreon time locked, even if that's gonna mean I'm a week behind. Definitely can't blame you for trying to make some money, lol. As for the story, again it's very hot, but it just makes me hope even more that we'll get to see "Lizzie" get her revenge. Seeing Gene come crashing down right as he's at his peak would be so satisfying, lol. Even if her husband *is* pathetic, because he most certainly is, lmao.
Rouental
2025-02-06 04:14:34 +0000 UTC
