Patreon Exclusive: The Cool Mom Part 3
Added 2024-12-05 04:18:35 +0000 UTCTa-da! I thought it would take me a little longer, but I did a writing marathon today and managed to finish up the Cool Mom Part 3: Once a Slut, Always a Slut!
A couple of release notes:
1. I am always looking to improve my work, and for these Patreon exclusives, I usually have a chance to revise them before the final version goes up on LIt. So please let me know if you have any feedback! On part two I got some excellent constructive criticism that I think really helped me improve the final draft, so if you notice anything that could be better, please let me know! I also really enjoy positive feedback if you have any, and it can be really encouraging and help motivate me in my future writing! Even just a "great job" can make my day.
2. As i explained earlier, in the attached version, I had to cut one major scene from the Patreon release, and let me tell you, I think the version here walks right up to the line even with that scene cut. I am happy to provide the uncut version if you email me at grogstoopid32@gmail.com
3. Like some of my stories, I have attached two alternate endings! Please vote for the ending you prefer! As usual, one is darker and one is lighter. Curious what you all think!
Comments
Thanks for the kind words! 8 think that with Ending A, the Elliot plotline would have to be followed up on in an epilogue story!
Mickey H Newman
2024-12-11 14:24:39 +0000 UTCGreat work! Thanks for sending me the cut scene, and for giving us the option to vote on an ending. I like either, but I voted for A, as it seems more in line with the tone and characterization up to the split. I was wondering, because in ending A it seems like Liv never realizes Marco was talking to Elliot about Vixen. Is the secret of what happened in the bathroom something that he is keeping as a personal victory/inside joke, or would he eventually reveal it to Liv to mess with her further? Or would she even care at that point?
Nylav
2024-12-08 21:44:02 +0000 UTCThank you so much! I do think that, despite her surrender in ending A, Liv would prove a lot harder to control than Marco thinks!
Mickey H Newman
2024-12-06 23:34:27 +0000 UTCThank you for writing one of my absolute favourite stories, not just by you but in general. I went with B even though I prefer the idea of, what I would consider, a darker ending than both. With A she achieve a kind of homeostasis that B hints might not be there. As messed up as her relationship with Marco is, he is a leash on her behaviour. What he says, goes. Either way, great work!
Maynardless
2024-12-06 23:09:34 +0000 UTC
